BEC商务英语名师评点网友作文(3)

　　本期作文题目：
　　芬利尼先生决定接受安吉拉.戈达德的邀请, 写一封接受邀请的回信,字数在120-140字左右.
　　感谢戈达德女士的来信；
　　对她的各项建议表示感兴趣；
　　接受她请你去看戏的邀请；
　　对她提同的日期表示不合适作出解释；
　　建议另改日程。
　　提示：写信时可注意把握行文语气的正式程度和礼貌委婉。
　　Sample
　　Dear Ms. Goddard:
　　Thank you very much for your letter on 4th Aug.
　　I feel pretty interested in the proposals that you have mentioned in your letter and so do our directors. I hope that we could have further discussion on it later on.
　　I think I really love your idea of going to the theatre together next Tuesday at 8:00 p.m. Unfortunately, I'll pay a regular visit to my client on that day.
　　Could it be possible for you to change the schedule? I'll be available next Thursday. I'd appreciate if you could change the arrangements.
　　I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
　　Sincerely yours
　　网友作文一：
　　Dear Ms.Angelia,
　　I'm appreciated that you are very prompt in answering my letter[1] .
　　It's intersting[2] what you advice in promting programe from all angles.
　　Thank you for inviting me to go to the theatre at 8:00 next monday. But i will be tied up at the moment because of regular meeting. There are 3 days available for me next week which from Tue. to sat.Would[3] you mind changing the time?
　　sincerely