和谐英语

2010年6月英语四六级写作笔记(二)

2010-04-04来源:和谐英语
第三节
  全真试题—Unit 1
  Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as
  many as bad books.
  注:由于是限制型定语从句,两个逗号应该去掉。
  认为:think,believe,argue,claim,hold
  But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of
  books can only give us one aspect of knowledge.
  注:but 改成 however;the 应该去掉;who从句前后逗号应该去掉
  To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible.
  By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.
  注:To my point 改成 in my opinion 或者 in my view;By 改成 In
  就我而言,我认为:as far as i am consider
  Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.
  注:more and more 改为 an increasing number of