英语四级六级作文训练营：改词扩句(第十期)

本期继续我们的改词扩句，主讲换词和关系词。。

原句：

They give us new information about the latest products. Some advertisements are very elegantly presented. And we are inspired or even moved by them. No matter it is an evil or an angel, advertisement has become an essential part of our modern life.

改句：

They provide us with up-to-date information about the latest products. Some advertisements are so elegantly presented that we are inspired or even moved. No matter it is an evil or an angel, advertisement has become an indispensable part of our modern life.

【解析】原句中有"give"这个常用词，我们细想一下用一个比较高级的词组"provide sb. with sth."来替换它，同理，我们把"new"换成"up-to-date"，把"essential"换成"indispensable"。

然后，再看原句中的连接词"and"，我们可以发现And连接的前后句并不是并列关系，而是因果关系，所以我们可以用"so…that…"来连接两个句子。

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President Bush said that medical science has given the power to some people to help save these young lives.

答案：President Bush said that medical science has provided some people with the power to help save these young lives.