2011年6月英语四级真题作文解析(昂立版)
2011年6月四级作文真题 Online Shopping
1 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2 网上购物有很多好处,也有不少问题
3 我的建议
此次四级作文话题online shopping,作文体裁属于议论文中的对比类,分析网购的利弊。话题不算新颖,是考生比较熟悉,容易发挥的话题。在昂立的写作课上我最后一次课重点强调了对比类作文,反复提醒学生一定要背下这个模板。
对比型议论文模板
One of the controversial issues today is ____________. According to a recent survey, ___________________________. In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative effects of this issue and offer my own view on it.
On the positive aspect, one of the most significant advantages is that ____________________(优点一). Moreover, _________________________________(优点二). Perhaps the primary advantage is that ___________________________.(优点三) On the negative aspect, for one thing, _________________________________.(缺点一) For another, ___________________________________.(缺点二)
As far as I’m concerned, the benefits of ___________(主题) greatly outweigh its drawbacks. We should make better use of ____________(主题) and bypass its negative effects.
首段介绍现在社会很多消费者青睐网购,第二段介绍网购的好坏,优点一是网购很方便,bring people convenience,星级词汇中的高频吐血短语。优点二是消费者有很多选择,customers have a variety of choices。缺点是网购存在质量风险,质量是quality。结尾第三段只需把话题online shopping 填进去。
此次作文话题网购是老生常谈的题目,类型是对比类,用课上对比类模板吻合程度高达百分之百,只要考前熟记这个模板,作文及格无障碍。