四六级写作最强模板（上）

1.    描图类模板
描图怎么描，大家根据我给的资料，整理出一个个性化的思路大纲应付此类题目。

编者按：以下列出了五个模块：

考试如果你打算写现象解释：请用①②③

即第一段：描图；第二段：现象解释；第三段：提倡解决

考试如果你打算写正反观点：请用①④

即第一段：描图；第二段：正反观点；第三段：自己观点

 

学霸版：到了考场自由组合，而⑤是例子和数据，见机在合适的地方插入即可。

首先大家要学会审题，看清楚题干到底要大家干什么！

 

模块1：描图

第一部分：描述图片

(1)     As is humorously/vividly/clearly/subtly depicted/described/portrayed/illustrated in the picture/drawing/cartoon, ______________. (句子)

(2)     The picture/cartoon displays/portrays a very special scene: __________________. (句子)

(3)     From the picture, a seemingly superficial phenomenon is presented:____________. (句子)

(4)     This photo captures a critical moment that ___________. (句子).

(5)     The drawing presents us with a thought-provoking scene: __________________. (句子)

(6)     In the picture we could see clearly that ______________________. (句子)

(7)     As we can see from the picture, ________. (句子)

(8)     As the picture given depicts, ________. (句子)

1.       用这些套句足矣，后面你自由发挥的句子更加精彩。

2.       表示图片的说法卡通 cartoon; 素描sketch; 照片photo; 图片 picture; 手绘drawing。

 

第二部分：图片含义

(1)     What the picture is trying to present is that _____(句).

(2)     The picture intends to inform us that ______(句).

(3)     What does the cartoonist want to tell us? Actually, this drawing shows us a social phenomenon that______________(句子).

(4)     The artist of the cartoon apparently intends to draw our attention to ________(主题单词).

(5)     In effect, this cartoon is a miniature of a prevalent phenomenon. _____(句).

(6)     Conspicuously, this cartoon symbolically characterizes a status quo. _____(句).

(7)     Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. _____(句).

举例：

 

 

​Ironically, the cartoon displays a very special scene: a young student is asking for a book named “How to Do Well in School Without studying”, and the lady at the front desk suggests him to find it in the fiction section. Obviously, the artist of the cartoon intends to draw our attention to a simple truth that there is no shortcut to learning.

★补充学霸版：

第一句：_________（背景句）, as is vividly described in the picture.

第二句：具体描述图片的大致内容

第三句：引出出题

背景句可以在下天龙八部的句子中选择（注意背景句只要写大范围即可）

1.      Technology may exert a great impact on our lives.

2.      The past several years has witnessed the widespread availability of the Internet.

3.      Environmental protection plays an important role in everyday life.

4.      Children’s education has captured numerous attentions from the general public.

5.      Aging population has recently arisen as one of the essential issues.

举例：

College education has recently arisen as one of the essential issues, as is vividly described in the cartoon. A young student is asking for a book named “How to Do Well in School Without studying”, and the lady at the front desk suggests him to find it in the fiction section. Obviously, the artist of the cartoon intends to draw our attention to a simple truth that there is no shortcut to learning.

 

模块2：现象解释

第一部分：阐述现象的普遍性（选用）

这部分可用可不用，看具体套用是否合适

(1)     Remarkably, this sort of phenomenon becomes the norm in our society, which can be seen almost everywhere.

(2)     Nobody fails to notice this fact, as it is now quite prevailing in contemporary society.

(3)     Strikingly, in contemporary society, this sort of phenomenon is becoming increasingly common and eye-catching.

第二部分：解释现象

(1)     There are mainly two factors contributing to this social phenomenon.

(2)     Why, you may wonder, does this phenomenon arise?

(3)     The reasons for this social phenomenon are as follows.

(4)     Two fundamental factors/reasons could account for this social phenomenon.

(5)     Personally, among all the factors that account for this trend, the following are worth mentioning.

第三部分：原因1

(1)     To begin with, ______________ might be responsible for this social phenomenon.

(2)     First and foremost, this problem stems/results from ________, which tends to be inevitable/unavoidable.

(3)     In the first place, this phenomenon could be attributed to ________, which majority of the population fails to take into consideration.

(4)     For one thing, this situation could be seen/considered/regarded/deemed as a result/consequence of ________.

(5)     Perhaps, this primary reason is that ____________________(句子)

第三部分：原因2（句式可以和原因1一样）

(1)     Moreover/Furthermore/What’s more, _____________________.

(2)     In addition, _____________________.

(3)     Besides, _____________________.

(4)     For another thing, ____________________.

(5)     The second reason is that __________________.

原因备选：

经济增长：economic growth; 人口膨胀：population expansion; 教育体制：education system; 家庭教育：family education; 社会影响：social influence; 环境因素：environmental impact;技术革新：technological innovation.

建议：最好能在原因后面补充叙述一些展开内容，可以套用《陈曲写作备考三部曲》文章的天龙八部或万能句。他们可以在这里用。

其中描述时代背景是其中的一种：

举个例子：

With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, people’s living standard has been very much improved.

或者：

With the development of our society, youngsters in mounting numbers are attaching much significance to the living standard.

举例：

Nevertheless, nowadays people tend to believe there is such a thing as a shortcut to learning. Remarkably, this sort of phenomenon becomes the norm in our society. There are mainly two factors contributing to this social illusion. To begin with, it stems from the educational system. Schools tend to attach less importance to the basic knowledge, but more to the academic scores. Secondly, this situation could be seen as a result of the social influence. Young people are under considerable pressure for a living because the competition is increasingly fierce. Consequently, majority of the students are always dreaming for a short path.

 

模块3：解决倡导

首先学习三种经典句型：

1.       倒装句：Only in this way can we _______________.

2.       强调句：Obviously, it is __________ that _________.

3.       虚拟语气：It is high time that we should take concerted steps to _______________.

第一部分：问题解决型总起

(1)     To ____________, in my mind, it calls for the efforts from all sides.

(2)     To ____________, in my mind, there are at least two approaches.

(3)     Urgent measures are needed to _______________.

(4)     The following ways can be adopted to ____________________.

To后面填上动词+名词组合

比如：发扬/抑制这种社会现象

发扬：advocate, enhance, strengthen, reinforce, further, advance

抑制：curb, cease, impede, prevent, put an end to, eliminate, rectify

现象：social phenomenon, situation, condition

好（现象）：positive, favorable, desirable

坏（现象）：negative, unfavorable, undesirable, adverse

比如为了解决这个现象，我们需要各方努力。

To put an end to this unfavorable phenomenon, in my mind, it calls for the efforts from all sides.

比如为了推动这个现象，我们有以下几个方法。

The following ways can be adopted to advocate this social phenomenon.

解决方案不外乎两种：第一种是“天下兴亡，匹夫有责”，所谓微观解决法；第二种是政府媒体，所谓宏观解决法。

第二句：解决方法1（微观解决）

(1)     From my perspective, only when all of us join in the efforts at all levels can we expect to ___________ properly.

(2)     From my perspective, it is particularly important that we should take actions.

(3)     It seems to me that it is high time that we should take concerted steps.

(4)     On the micro level, I believe it is every individual’s duty to ____________________.

(5)     From where I stand, every one of us might as well _____________________.

第三句：解决方法2（宏观解决）

(1)     Equally important/Similarly/Likewise, I gradually realize that the authority and mass media need to shoulder this responsibility.

(2)     In the meantime/Meanwhile/Simultaneously, I personally believe that the authority and mass media need to assume this responsibility.

(3)     Since my own voice is too weak to be heard, I hope we can call on the public to take this responsibility.

(4)     Moreover, if government makes relevant policies and measures, the problem can be readily solved(e.g.) in the foreseeable future.

(5)     Some relevant laws and regulations should be enacted and enforced.

(6)     On the macro level, the government and mass media should be held accountable.

(7)     It is urgent and imperative for the mass media to take some measures.

举例：

The following ways, from my perspective, can be adopted to address the problem. On the macro level, if the department of education can shoulder the responsibility and make relevant measures, the schools will pay more attention to teaching basic knowledge in the future. On the micro level, only by hard work can we form the bedrock of good performance in school.

模块4：正反论述

第一句：引出争议

(1)     There is much controversy over __________.

(2)     ________ has given rise to a heated discussion.

(3)     _______has caused quite a stir among the general public.

(4)     As regards ______, there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society.

(5)     Opinions vary when it comes to _________.

第二句：叙述正方观点

Some argue/maintain/believe/suggest/hold that ________.

第三句：叙述反方观点

(1)     Nevertheless, other people adopt a completely different view. They believe that ______.

(2)     However, those who strongly oppose are not among the minority. They hold that _____.

第四句：利弊关系（另起一段）

(1)     When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to be in favor of the former/latter one in that _____. (犀利)

(2)     When considering opinions of both sides, I find they are of the equal weight in that _____. (中庸)

(3)     Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. (中庸)

万能经典（双刃剑）：

(4)     ______ is just like a double-edged sword. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use, always being a master instead of slave of them. (中庸)

(5)     Accordingly, we might as well avoid those undesirable effects, when making full use of it. (中庸)

或者直接写上自己的观点，用六脉神剑“独”这步。

There is much controversy over whether technology plays an indispensable role in school. Some argue that advanced technology has brought much convenience to students, while enriching the teaching methods in class. However, others adopt a completely different view. They believe technology can be used as an auxiliary tool for interactive teaching and learning, but one can never rely too much on technology.

Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. However, to my knowledge, I am fully convinced that technology is not everything and one should be very prudent in using the technology.

模块5：事例数据

第一句：引出事例

(1)     I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following one.

(2)     A case in point is that _____________________（句子）.

(3)     Numerous illustrations can be given, but this will suffice.

(4)     For instance, __________________________.

(5)     There are inspiring (好现象)/upsetting(坏现象) parallels today. _________（学霸版）.

第二句：写实际事例

自己准备一些万能的例子，如果写人类的精神，以下这个例子一般能用。

Take Steve Jobs, the Apple company founder, a great innovator, who strikes to the belief for his life time that __________ comes before victory, for instance. Without it, he couldn’t have built Apple into an incredibly successful company with a string of successes no one else can rival. (括号里填上creativity，就成了另一个例子)

举例：

There is much controversy over the issue of whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. To my knowledge, online communication can replace the traditional way. Last year, I went to the US as an exchange student. I talked with my parents through skype and it was really convenient. We shared all the happiness and sadness on the internet and I could never forget that experience.

例文：

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the impact of social networking websites on reading. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

 

 

“I love reading. I read about 3 hours a day.

My favorite book is Facebook*.”

*Facebook is the name of a social networking website.

 

       As we can see from the picture, two persons are discussing about reading. While to our amusement, the boy says his favorite book is Facebook. The picture seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts, which intends to inform us that the social network has exerted an important impact on our daily reading.

       Opinions vary when it comes to the impact of social networking websites on reading. Some people insist that social network provides them with large collections of information at a tremendous speed and stimulates their reading interest. On the contrary, other people claim that nowadays a host of youngsters pay so much attention to reading on social networks that they don’t have adequate opportunities or time to read traditional books.

       There is no surprise that there are different opinions about the impact of social networking websites on reading. However, as a college student, I am convinced that it is necessary for us to read on social networking websites, but it is of greater necessity for us to read traditional books. We can never overly depend on social network. Only in this way can we become more educated and have a more bright future.

2.    引言类模板
第一部分：概要

第一类引言：题目当中非常清晰地指出写作的内容。

如：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying “A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention.” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

题目要求围绕着the impact of the information explosion来写，并给出例证，解释what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information.

第二类引言：题目当中并没有指出写作的内容，只给引言。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on Albert Einstein’s remark “I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.” You can cite one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 but no more than 200 words.

针对于第二类引言，大家的当务之急就是从这句引言中，选择一个合适的主题。注意：题干没有给出要求，只要扣住引言，原理上都不偏题。比如：I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious. 显然这句话的重心在curious上，讲述了好奇心的重要性。用天龙八部的话说：Curiosity plays an extremely important role in achieving success. 或者Curiosity exerts a huge impact on one’s life and career.

第二部分：写法

1. 经典模块版：

这种模式帮助各位同学迅速上手，在考场上构思出一片上乘的佳作，再辅之以我前几天的内容，相信大家能在规定时间内完成。

第一段：重述引言，并且讲述引言的含义。

第一部分：重述引言

(1) Just as the saying goes, ______.

(2) It is often said that _______.

(3) An ancient philosopher once stated that _____.

第二部分：解释含义

(1) The saying tells us that ________.

(2) The saying indicates that _______.

(3) The saying obviously emphasizes /highlights _____.

范例（大家注意例子的变化）：

The famous scientist Albert Einstein once stated that “I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.” Simple as the remark may sound, it intends to tell us that the importance of being curious. Being curious contributes greatly to our growth and eventually leads to our success.

第二段：讨论引言的正确性，或者举出实际例子来验证引言。

第一部分：总起

There are several reasons contributing to the correctness of this principle.

Two factors, from my point of view, could account for the validity of this principle.

Why, you may wonder, is curiosity so important for our success?

第二部分：分述（详见我的第一篇中六脉神剑，选择合适的词语）

To begin with, _________.

Furthermore, _________.

范例：

Two factors could account for the importance of being curious. To begin with, curiosity can be seen as the key to success. Only when one is curious about something will he dedicate himself to it. Take Thomas Edison for example, it was his curiosity that made him invent so many things for the future generations. Furthermore, curiosity provides us with the motivation to go forward and inspires us to learn new knowledge. As Apple Company founder Steve Jobs once said, “stay hungry, stay foolish.”

第三部分：两种主要展开方式（解决倡导 + 总结观点）

建议可以这样来：

Given the factors I have just outlined, I personally argue that 总结一下文章。加几句议论。

范例：

Given the factors I have just outlined, I personally argue that it is of great necessity for us to keep curious about the world. It is curiosity that may push the world exploration into the next step. Only in this way can we have a better world.

再来看一篇短小的参考范文：

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. You can give explain to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

    Choosing a right strategy can exert a huge impact on our success. An English saying goes like this: Don’t put all your eggs in one basket. What it wants to reveal is that it is unwise to be totally dependent on one resource.

    There are several reasons contributing to the validity of this principle. To begin with, it is rather risky to put all the hope in one place. If one can have a contingency plan, it can deal with the unexpected when it comes to important event. What’s more, focusing on all the aspects at the same time contributes to a more balanced life. Suppose one would like to be admitted into a college. It is of vital importance for him to apply for several colleges. In this way, there is a better chance for him to be admitted.

Therefore, it is unadvisable to put everything on a single venture. Having a backup plan could help one lead a better life.

2. 个性特色版：

如果你要写出自己的版本，那么考场上一定要注意时间。思路可以按照我以下的框架来搭，这种方法一般同学请慎重使用。

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.” You can give an example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

 写作思路：

第一段：叙述引出；

第二段：个人例证；

第三段：总结陈述。

范文（考神团队 陈曲版）：

It has been widely noted that it is of utmost importance for a man to be equipped with knowledge. Knowledge allows one to understand the history of the world, the secrets of the universe and the stories of celebrities. Consequently, one can consider knowledge as priceless treasure. However, a bellyful of theories but very little experience makes us somewhat bookish. Without much practice, we can hardly make use of knowledge, and hence fail to unlock the treasure of knowledge. As the saying goes, ”Practice makes perfect”.

As a chemistry student, I have learned virtually all the fundamental principles in the chemical world during my university life. I had felt rather conceited until one day my mom asked me an unexpected question, which had never been taught in textbooks, ”how to wipe off the yellow stain at the bottom of the tea cup”. After a serious thought, I was totally silent and did not have a single clue. Smiling happily, mom showed me how the use vinegar or radish water to eliminate the stain left by tea leaves. Perhaps this method could be attributed to the “acid-base” theory, but how can I possibly not come up with such an idea?

Based on my personal experience, it is quite obvious that knowledge will be of little use if we do not put it into practice. Rather, we should link what we learn with how we do things. Swimming in the ocean of knowledge, we should consider how to make the water more drinkable.​​​​