六级作文冲刺点拨:决胜关键在于创造闪光点

　　No garden has no weeds替换Every coin has two sides
　　Computers do play，do强调
　　Positive替换important / good等
　　A slice of替换a part of
　　Unfavorable替换bad
　　Impacts替换effects / influences
　　We should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入语
　　Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换advantage ( defects替换disadvantage )
　　Facet替换aspect 　
　　由此可见，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！
　　以下是30个最经典的替换词供参考。 　
1: individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)
　　2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising
　　(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good
　　3: dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad
　　如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代替
　　eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
　　4: (an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many.
　　注：用many, if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
　　Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,代替most.
　　5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some
　　6: harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
　　hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
　　it is universally acknowledged that)替think
　　(因为是书面语，所以要加that)
　　7: affair ,business ,matter代替thing
　　8: shared代common
　　9: reap huge fruits代替get much benefit )
　　10: for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion
　　11: Increasing(ly),growing代替more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.
　　Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.
　　Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
　　12: little if anything,或little or nothing代替hardly
　　13: benefitial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of
　　14: shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer
　　15: exceedingly,extremely代替very
　　16: hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable ...代替necessary,
　　inevitable
　　17: sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb代替sb take interest in
　　18: capture one's attention代替attract one's attention.
　　19: facet,demension,sphere代aspect
　　20: be indicative of ,be suggesteive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear
　　21: give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger代替cause.
　　22: There are several reasons behind sth代替..reasons for sth
　　23: desire代替want.
　　24: pour attention into代替pay attention to
　　25: bear in mind that代替remember
　　26: enjoy, possess代替have(注意process是过程的意思)
　　27: interaction代替communication
　　28: frown on sth代替be against , disagree with sth
　　29: to name only a few, as an example代替for example
　　30: next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible