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名师指导:四步法快速突破写作瓶颈

2008-03-17来源:
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1. 如何助残
2. 女大学生就业难的原因
3. 节能倡议
4. 奥运会志愿者招聘书
5. 节约型社会还是消费型社会
6. 你理想中的大学

1. 认真审题;分类处理

例:一篇典型利弊两分法的议论文
Increased College Enrollment
1). 近年来大学入学率逐年上升
2). 大学扩招的益处及潜在问题
3). 我对大学扩招的看法

2. 头脑风暴;充实例子

第一段引入主题:高校扩招。
第二段分析高校扩招的益处:
缓解了父母和高中生们的心理压力;提高全国教育水平;培养更多有专长的人才。
第三段扩招造成的一些问题:
造成大学里师资和教学设施短缺;使就业市场竞争更加激烈。
第四段阐述我的观点。

3. 调动词藻;丰富句型

enrollment expansion;admitting more students into universities

Recent years has witnessed a steady increase in college enrollment.

High-school students welcome the practice, for they would have better chance of receiving higher education.

With a growing number of students enrolled, a tough issue most universities face is inadequate teaching staff and facilities.

However, one can never equate a college degree with a better job or future.


4 卷面整洁;细致检查

In recent years, there is a steady increase in college enrollment. To many high-school students, it's definitely good news, for they would have better chance of receiving higher education.

You don't have to look very far to find out the advantages of the increased college enrollment. For one thing, it lessens the worries of both high school graduates and their parents. Besides,increased college enrollment can contribute to raise the educational level of our nation. What's more, increased college enrollment can provide more students with specialized knowledge, thus serving our development in a positive way.

On the other hand, we can not deny that there are some potential problems about increased college enrollment. To begin with, with the increased number of students, the shortage of teaching staff and facilities becomes clearly seen. Worst of all, increased college enrollment leads to increased competition in the job market.

It's not an easy task to tell whether the tendency should be encouraged. As to me, it's laudable to grant more students higher education. But a college degree is by no means a guarantee for a better job or future. To cast a promising career, we need a lot more abilities which we can not learn from college.