和谐英语

名师指导:四六级写作十天快速提高

2008-03-17来源:
一、真题
2007年6月:Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed
1.有的人认为应该有回报
2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报
3.我的看法
Lei Feng, a communist soldier, who "devoted his limited life to the limitless cause of serving the people", has long been set as an outstanding example to encourage us to spare no efforts to help those in need, whereas, with the passage of time, people voice different opinions towards doing good deeds.

Some insists "A good turn deserves another", as the old saying goes, which indicates that a good deed ought to bring about a reward, the motivation or the stimulus for the favor. Meanwhile, others believe good deeds belong to voluntary work, purely out of willingness, which has nothing to do with expectation for rewards.

As to me, good deeds are supposed to result from spontaneous reaction confronted with certain circumstances, ranging from giving up one seat to a silver-haired passenger aboard the bus, donating blood to the designated organization by Red Cross to traveling to the remote and poverty-stricken areas to serve as a volunteer for a whole year. In short, rewards are by no means the trigger or purpose for intention of conducting good deeds, no matter how trivial or stunning they are.

二、秘诀

1、大纲标准记心头--有的放矢;
2、技法套路勤操练--他为己用;
3、有头有尾有内容--合法舞弊;
4、开头结尾妙语连--一见钟情;
5、妙语长句相结合--多多益善;
6、行文过渡少而精--适可而止;
7、谚语名言增文采--少用慎用;
8、标点句型莫乱用--按需分配;
9、篇幅长短预先定--心中有数;
10、清晰流畅整行头--圆体连笔。

Writing is somewhere between cheating and creating.

Write → Cheat
Clumsy Cheating → Author
Brilliant Cheating → Writer