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新东方大学英语六级讲义与笔记:写作(三)

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How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.

Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.

But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.

Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.

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Some people think reading shall be chosen. Because some books are good to human beings and some books are harmful to people.

Some people think that men should read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.

It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.

   失分原因：结构失调，表述方式单一

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：

（启）Paragraph   I：（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点；                                  （2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。（承）Paragraph  II：（1）提出一种观点或优点；                                  （2）本段的支持性分论点；                                  （3）本段总结（可以省略）。（转）Paragraph III：（1）承上启下的过渡句；                                  （2）提出另一种观点或缺点；                                  （3）本段的支持性分论点                                  （4）本段总（可以省略）。（合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡两种看法；                                  （2）给出自己的观点。④

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.（启）

注：

Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.（承）

注：    2.they argue that = they think that

    3.with the development of...

    4.what's more 递进关系，moreover

But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.（转）

注：1.But 转折词

        2.they emphasize that = they think that

        3.today's society is not what it was 现代社会今昔非比    4.许多知识 a wide range of/a large scope of/much；获取知识 acquire/get knowledge

    5.knows nothing→little；he may be useless→he may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉

Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.（合）

 

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When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.

Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.

注：“people, who”应去掉逗号，改为非限制定语从句。    2.they suggest that = they think that

        3.touch 碰，闪光点词汇，如教材shoulder the responsibility of doing sth. 肩负起责任

But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.

To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.
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