写作：六级四十天突破—讲义与笔记（8）

图表题：

三图一表--柱状图（Bar Graph）、线形图(Line Graph)、饼状图(Pie Graph)、表格(Table)

图表题文章写作逻辑结构：

Paragraph I:（1）描述图表：趋势描写；

     （2）描述图表：必要数据支持（细节性）。

Paragraph II:（1）提出自己理由和观点；

     （2）细节性分论点（支持自己观点）。

Paragraph III:（1）预测未来和提出解决方法；

            （2）总结全文和表达作者自己观点。 

Car Accidents Declining in Walton City

According to the graph, the rise and fall of the rate of car accidents in Walton City varies with the seasons. From January to March last year it increased by 68%, from March to June it dropped by about half the previous rate; and from June to August there was a steep  rise of 66.6%. After that, however, there was a steady decrease, and this makes us optimistic that car accidents are declining in Walton City.

注：1.According to the graph 如图所示，还可以说成 As can be seen from the graph

       2.steep rise 陡然上升，steady decrease 缓慢下降 

There are three reasons for this improvement. First, new traffic regulations have made drivers more careful, second, more people are using bicycles for transportation, and third, in the later part of the year good weather made the roads safer to drive on.

 

This year, major roads have been repaired and the number of public buses has been increased. Moreover, a traffic safety campaign has made all the local people more aware of the dangers of unsafe driving. So, I am confident that there will be even fewer car accidents in Walton in the future.

Film Is Giving Way to TV

(A)

The latest statistics show that the number of people attending cinemas is getting steadily smaller. At the same time, the number of television viewers is growing at almost the same rate.

Experts say that these two trends are connected in three ways. First, over the past few decades television sets have appeared in almost every home. Second, film very quickly become available on video, and can be shown on the TV screen. Third, it is becoming more expensive to make films, and so the prices of cinema seats are rising.

However, this does not mean the death of the movie industry. There will always be people who prefer to go out to see a film. This is because no matter how good a TV film or video, it can never be as entertaining as a film shown on the “big screen.”

社会热点话题

用My View On Fake Commodity改写Brain Drain

Brain Drain

       Brain drain is a delicate problem with which our country is confronted. In the last ten years or so, a lot of scientists and technicians have swarmed into developed countries for further studies or research work, let alone numerous promising students. And there are no indications that they will be back home before long. Our country has paid the expenses of training them but lost them. How did that come about?

         It is self-evident that their delay of coming back is due to those favorable working and living conditions which are essential to research work. Sophisticated equipment makes it easier for one to gain academic achievements. Our competent scientists abroad are offered higher rewards and greater opportunities which contribute to their success in career.

         It seems that it isn’t impossible to solve the problem and attract the scientists and the like back home so long as great importance is attached to the intellectual’s deserving treatment and effective measures are taken to provide them with excellent pay and agreeable conditions.

 

My View on Brain Drain

The prevalence of brain drain has been a big problem in our society. Almost every day in newspapers carry articles pertaining to  brain drain . Although measures have been implemented to deal with this problem, it still remains a serious threat.

   

 A multitude of factors, both individual and social contribute to brain drain. For one thing, a large of scientists and technicians have swarmed into developed countries for favorable living and working conditions which are essential to research and work. Sophisticated equipment also makes it easier to gain academia achievement. For another, a great many top universities in developed countries offer higher rewards and greater opportunities which contribute to their success in career.

   

There are several ways to address this problem. Rules and regulations should be implemented to control. At the same time, people with outstanding academic  perfoming  should be educated to gain their willness of coming back. With tough laws and an educated public, brain drain will become a thing of the past.

                                

[讲义] 15．A +{Number/multitude}+ of factors, both + {physical and psychological/academic and professional/individual and social} + {affect/influence/contribute to/both  promote},….