名师点拨：四六级高分作文的写作模式（二）
2008-04-01来源:
首段示例 2 ： 标题： Can Schoolchildren Start Using the Internet?
提纲： 1 ）随着科技的发展，网络越来越普及；
2 ）网络有其优点但也有缺点；
3 ）我的观点 根据上面的提示，首段可有下列几种方式：
1) Nowadays, using the Internet has become a fashion. Many parents begin to teach their children to use the Internet. However, there are diverse opinions on this. Some think it wise, but I don't agree with them. 2) Today, the Internet is becoming more and more common. It begins to play a more and more important role in our society and life. It's so useful that most adults are learning how to use it. What about children? Of course they can start using it. 3) Today, with the development of science and technology, the Internet is beginning to play a more and more important role in our life. More and more people are starting to use the Internet, including schoolchildren. However, I think schoolchildren are too young to start using the Internet. 4) According to a recent survey, Internet users are becoming younger and younger, and Internet bars have become a resort for schoolchildren who log in to chat or play games. Faced with this phenomenon, many people argue for measures to prevent schoolchildren from using the Internet, and I think they have their reasons. 2 ． 结论段的写作
结论一般采用归纳概括、主题重述或提建议等方式。 常见的方式有：
1 ） 重述或总结主题
重述主题指于结论处以另外一种表达方式重申主题，与首段照应。
Families offer us warmth and care. Friends give us strength and horizon. They both help us understand the world as it is. Both of them are the dearest parts in our life. 2 ） 提出建议
Since postcards do us more harm and good, since we have many other ways to convey our feelings and promote our friendship, I hope everyone will take actions now to stop using postcards. 3 ） 概括总结
As we can see from the above, living in the suburb we can stay away from pollution, lead an easy leisure time, and needn't invest too much money, so I prefer living in the suburb to living in the city. 4 ） 引用名人名言
In particular, I enjoy what Francis Bacon said "Studies serve for delight, for ornament and for ability." 5) 综合法
与首段一样，结论段也可以是多种方法的综合。一般说来，总结加建议的比较多。 尾段示例 1 ： 如 " 网络 " 的结论段可以如下所示：
10 ） As we all know, the next century will become one of the Internet. Internet will become more and more important in both our daily life and our work. So I suggest that schoolchildren should start using the Internet. 11 ） So I think schoolchildren not only can start using the Internet, but also should start using it They are sure to benefit a lot from the internet. 12 ） Internet can help our children know the world, get useful information and enrich their knowledge. So I think schoolchildren can start using the Internet. 13 ） In a word (In conclusion/ In summary/ To sum up / In short), the Internet is playing a more and more important role in our life and it is helpful for children's growth both physically and mentally. It is better for them to start using the Internet as early as possible.
提纲： 1 ）随着科技的发展，网络越来越普及；
2 ）网络有其优点但也有缺点；
3 ）我的观点 根据上面的提示，首段可有下列几种方式：
1) Nowadays, using the Internet has become a fashion. Many parents begin to teach their children to use the Internet. However, there are diverse opinions on this. Some think it wise, but I don't agree with them. 2) Today, the Internet is becoming more and more common. It begins to play a more and more important role in our society and life. It's so useful that most adults are learning how to use it. What about children? Of course they can start using it. 3) Today, with the development of science and technology, the Internet is beginning to play a more and more important role in our life. More and more people are starting to use the Internet, including schoolchildren. However, I think schoolchildren are too young to start using the Internet. 4) According to a recent survey, Internet users are becoming younger and younger, and Internet bars have become a resort for schoolchildren who log in to chat or play games. Faced with this phenomenon, many people argue for measures to prevent schoolchildren from using the Internet, and I think they have their reasons. 2 ． 结论段的写作
结论一般采用归纳概括、主题重述或提建议等方式。 常见的方式有：
1 ） 重述或总结主题
重述主题指于结论处以另外一种表达方式重申主题，与首段照应。
Families offer us warmth and care. Friends give us strength and horizon. They both help us understand the world as it is. Both of them are the dearest parts in our life. 2 ） 提出建议
Since postcards do us more harm and good, since we have many other ways to convey our feelings and promote our friendship, I hope everyone will take actions now to stop using postcards. 3 ） 概括总结
As we can see from the above, living in the suburb we can stay away from pollution, lead an easy leisure time, and needn't invest too much money, so I prefer living in the suburb to living in the city. 4 ） 引用名人名言
In particular, I enjoy what Francis Bacon said "Studies serve for delight, for ornament and for ability." 5) 综合法
与首段一样，结论段也可以是多种方法的综合。一般说来，总结加建议的比较多。 尾段示例 1 ： 如 " 网络 " 的结论段可以如下所示：
10 ） As we all know, the next century will become one of the Internet. Internet will become more and more important in both our daily life and our work. So I suggest that schoolchildren should start using the Internet. 11 ） So I think schoolchildren not only can start using the Internet, but also should start using it They are sure to benefit a lot from the internet. 12 ） Internet can help our children know the world, get useful information and enrich their knowledge. So I think schoolchildren can start using the Internet. 13 ） In a word (In conclusion/ In summary/ To sum up / In short), the Internet is playing a more and more important role in our life and it is helpful for children's growth both physically and mentally. It is better for them to start using the Internet as early as possible.
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