写作：六级四十天突破—讲义与笔记（13）

 

一、语法错误

二、词汇错误

三、逻辑错误

四、多词少词

 

Example:Television is rapidly becoming the literature   

of our periods. Many of the arguments                           1.time/times/age

having used for the study for literature as a                     2.     /   

school subject are valid for ∧ study of television.            3.   the  

 

综 合 改 错（Errors Correction）： 一、 语法错误

1、平行结构(not only...but also/both...and/either...or/and)

  1) A professor’s salary is higher than a secretary.[secretary’s]

  2) One of these is informative, interesting, and is easy to understand.[去掉]

3) Defining a problem is easier than to provide a solution.[providing]

2、连词错误

1) Candle will later be replaced by lamp, that could burn longer and lighter. [which]

2) The children attended a small elementary school (often of just one room) to that they had to walk every day, possibly for a few miles. [which，that前只能有except和in。except that除此以外；in that因为，体现在]

3) It will be interesting to discover how many young people go to universities without any idea of that they are going to do afterward. [what，what相当于the thing that]

4) It appears that we all find company in sound, if we demand a little quiet from time to time. [but或yet]

5) They are likely to travel more and to want more education. Nevertheless, many more jobs are available in these services. [Therefore或So]

3、分词错误

1) Police’s records show a surprised link between changes in the seasons and crime patterns. [surprising]

 2) Deciding how much discomfort and risk we are preparing to put up with in the name of better health is a high personal matter, not a decision we should remain to doctors alone.

3) Even the quiet of our careful protected wilderness areas can be invaded at any moment by a passed jet. [passing]

4) So a sportsman’s individual way of walking with raised shoulders is imitated by an admired fan. [admiring]

4、指代错误

      1) A break in their employment, or a decision to work part time, will slow its raises and promotions-because it would for men. [their]

      2) Clearly some risks worth taking, especially when the rewards are high: a man surrounded by flames and smoke generally considers that jumping out of a second-floor window is an acceptable risk to save its life. [his]

       3) The modern light-house also identifies it in a code known to all ships. [itself]

5、形容词、副词（略）

6、谓语错误（主谓一致、时态、语态）

1)    Business today whether it is running a little gas-station or a big factory take good management.[takes]

2)   Advances in technology has also changed people’s lives.

3)   But if 98 percent of us doesn’t need to work, what are we going to do with ourselves? [don’t]

4)   Whether women who have started a career will attain pay equality with men rest on at least two factors. [rests]

              5)   In some places all the trees have cut down. [have been]

二、词汇错误三、逻辑错误（肯定否定乱用）1)    Blood pressure drugs definitely help some people live after a heart attack, but these same drugs may be both necessary and harmful for those with only mild blood pressure problems. [unnecessary]

2)   In every case, the influential person may consciously notice the imitation but he will feel comfortable in its presence. [unconsciously]

四、多词少词（介词、冠词、形式宾语）

1)   When two Americans meet for first time, it is normal for them to call each other by their given name immediately. [the first]

            2)In fact, until recently seawater has almost be considered to be useless and no value. [of no]