名师辅导:六级英语主体段落的写作方法
2008-05-28来源:
在主体段落的写作中,要注意做到统一性、连贯性和简洁性。中心句是为了保持文章思路的一致;用适当的连接句排列好段落的布局,使文章连贯流畅;根据不同的题型选择所需的展开方法,表达要尽量简洁明白。除了以上这些需要做到的,在主体段落的写作中还有一些需要避免出现的问题: A. 低水平重复用词:在文章的写作中,我们常会有这样的表现,遇见表示喜欢,就只会用like,其实还有很多表示喜欢的词,不要浪费它们:prefer/enjoy/love/appreciate等等。还有在表达个人看法的时候,用来用去都是I think,其实I suppose/I guess/personally speaking,多样化的用词绝对可以提高你的得分率。英文报纸里可以找到你要的又新又实用的词汇。我记得我六级考试作文是关于面试的,我在里面写了这样一句话:A successful interview is win—winone for both job—hunter and enaployer.成功的面试对于顾主和求职者而言是双赢的。相信这样的用词一定会给老师一个好印象。 B.太过生僻的词汇:像不用decrease/remove,而用abate。不用stop/pause而用cessation,不用home/house而用habitation,其实这样做是没有必要的,不要以为生僻的词别人不用你用就是有特点。要以表达清楚句意和适合语境为主。生僻的词运用不好反而会闹笑话。俚语最好是不用。因为俚语在英语中是十分口语化的东西,而且千变万化。你理解的词或句子老师也许都不明白,所以还是不用为妙。 C.句式单调:有些同学为了拿高分,非要“语不惊人誓不休”。在临场发挥的情况下,做到这点是比较难的。句子还是以简单的短句为妙,即能多表达几层意思,又能便于老师评判。那么如何在即使是同一个意思的表达下使句子显得有特点一些呢?那就要考句式的变化了。看下面这个例子,对“粗心驾驶易引起车祸”,可以有这样一些不同的说法: a.Traffic accidents are invited by careless driving. b.Careless driving invites traffic accidents. c.Anyone who drives carelessly is to invite traffic accidents. d.Traffic accidents are what careless driving invites. e.The fact that you drive carelessly invites traffic accidents. 你看,稍微换个外表会使你的文章更有趣味性和可读性。 1)段落写作中常用的套路。在各种类型的写作中总是会有一定规律可循的,那就是句的的使用。记住一些实用的句型,在考试中可以提高行文速度。 A.说明原因的句型:a.There are some/two/many good reasons for/to do something. e.g:a.There are two good reasons for the changes in the way that people communicate with each other.b.The reason for…is that B.表示不同看法的句型:Some believe that…others argue that…still others maintain that… eg:a.Some people hold the opinion that it i8 hood to live with parents.b.They differ greatly in their attitude towards pollution problem.
C.辩论中常用的句型: a.There is no doubt that… b.It is obvious/clear that… c.As is known to all… d.It goes without saying that… e.What is more important… f.I am convinced that…. D.举例表示法:for.example,for instance,let’s shave an example,a good case in point… E.概述(用于图表作文): a.According to the figures given in the table… b.This chart shows that… c.As is shown by the graph… d.It can be seen from the statistics that… e.There is a slight/slow/rapid rise/increase、decrease/fall/drop in income/population/price/production… 3、wonderful ending,happy ending
C.辩论中常用的句型: a.There is no doubt that… b.It is obvious/clear that… c.As is known to all… d.It goes without saying that… e.What is more important… f.I am convinced that…. D.举例表示法:for.example,for instance,let’s shave an example,a good case in point… E.概述(用于图表作文): a.According to the figures given in the table… b.This chart shows that… c.As is shown by the graph… d.It can be seen from the statistics that… e.There is a slight/slow/rapid rise/increase、decrease/fall/drop in income/population/price/production… 3、wonderful ending,happy ending