和谐英语

08年6月六级写作预测-职业生涯

2008-07-25来源:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Starting Career in a Big City or Small Town? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
  1. 很多的大学生毕业后留在大城市工作;
  2. 也有人选择到小城镇开始自己的职业生涯;
  3. 结合自己的实际情况谈谈自己的想法。
  ● 审题概述●
  这是一篇议论文,观点很明确。去大城市发展还是到小城镇工作。可以分段列明两者的优缺点,然后提出自己的看法。
  “作文范文”
Starting Career in a Big City or Small Town
  Want to be a small fish in a big pond or ①the other way round? Every graduate faces this question when he starts his career. Some prefer to stay in the big cities after graduation. To them, big cities mean more experiences, more opportunities to see the big world and more space for career development. At the same time, higher salary is another ②temptation.
  But① some other graduates want to start in small towns. Even though there may not be many big companies, they can have a quieter and less competitive life. Another reason is they can be a big fish in a small pond. They can easily get the management's attention and may win promotion earlier.
  As far as I am concerned, I prefer to start in a big city like Shanghai. ①A good begin is half the battle, and in Shanghai I can find a job in a big company where I can meet people from different places and cultures. I will learn from them what I can not get from textbooks.
  ◇第一段思路点评:
   在大城市发展的好处
  ◇语言点提示:
   ①the other way round:意为“与之相反”
   ②temptation:意为“诱惑”
  ◇第二段思路点评:
   在小城镇工作的好处
  ◇语言点提示:
   ① some other graduates:提出另一观点
  ◇第三段思路点评:
   个人看法
  ◇语言点提示:
   ①A good begin is half the battle:意为“开头好等于成功了一半”