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英语六级写作训练 工作和专业相关性并不大

2009-03-30来源:和谐英语
  Relationship Between Major and Future Job
  1 现在很多人工作的具体内容和其在大学所学的专业知识相关性并不大。
  2 出现这种现象的原因。
  3 我的看法
  题目分析:
  被迫学习自己不喜欢的专业绝对是种痛苦,Chance对此略有体会。写作可先从所学专业和未来工作之间关系开始讨论,接着罗列出现该现象的原因,如盲目报考热门专业,未真正找到自身兴趣所在等等。最后,给出自己观点,本文最好采用正面观点:尽管专业不对口,自己也要适应。
  参考范文:
  Relationship Between Major and Future Job
  It’s a striking fact that there isn’t necesary relationship between one’s major and specific job duties for majority of people. Many people condemn this on outdated education system an some even complain that textbooks are useless.
  This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First of all , it’s a common sense that there alwasys exists a gap between theory and practice. This gap needs to be bridged by continuous exporation of similarities and differences between these two factors and accordingly corresponding modification. Secondly, due to the rapid development of technology, the knowledge from textbooks becomes behind the times soon . And it will lead to the disassociation between what one acquired in college education and what he does at work.
  From my point of view, when faced with the disassociation, one should adapt himself to working environment as soon as possible by adjusting his own information system. What’s more important, life-long learing is essential to one’s career success. Even after one reached the required levels from college education curriculum, pursuit of knowledge should never be ceased. Last but not the least, we should bear this firmly in mind that one’s ability is valued much more than one’s academic degree.  
  好词佳句总结:
  It’s a striking fact that…… 开篇点题~
  disassociation 分离,指专业与工作不匹配而出现的情况。文中讨论会多次用到。
  a gap between theory and practice 理论与实践,其中一个有力观点
  This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons, first of all, secondly, thirdly, last but not least.
  From my point of view 经典的强悍句式,过级必备!  
  附 2008年大学英语四六级评分标准:
  33分--条理不清、思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
  39分--基本切题。表达思想不清楚连贯性差。有较多严重的语言错误。
  45分--基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。
  57分--切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
  67分--切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺。连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
  文字不足酌情扣分:100-119扣1分;90-99扣3分;80-89扣4分;70-79扣5分;60-69扣6分;50-59扣7分;不足50扣9分。