英语六级写作分三步展开
2009-11-14来源:和谐英语
D 2000.1 how I finance my college education
--〉大学费用越来越贵，学生来自不同收入的家庭，支付学费的方式不一而同。我的方式如何?--〉(怎么贵--占家庭开支比重上升;支付方式如何不同：打工，依赖父母)
College education fee is always on the increase. Generally, a higher percentage of family expense goes to education. With family background varying from person to person,(家庭背景应人而异) how students finance their education also differs. Some rely on working part-time, while others on parents. As for me, I depend on both.
从观点的多个层次描写(如果开始段落涉及观点可以融合，则最大程度上进行融合)：1，打工能够锻炼独立性，了解社会，为毕业以及学习动力做好准备2，大部分钱依靠父母，学生的主要职责是多学。
First and foremost, working part-time offers a chance to know the society well and develop your independence, thus supplying motivation for even harder work at school(为学校努力学习提供动力) and making preparations for graduation. Secondly but equally important, relying on parents for most of the education fee helps you overcome the worry of money (克服钱的麻烦)and the unnecessary disturbance of work(工作不必要的打扰), so that you can concentrate on your major task as a student: study.
个人认为最好是两者结合，要注意处理之间的关系，不能本末倒置。
As far as I am concerned, I will combine these two ways. However, they should be properly balanced. Most important, we should never put the cart before the horse.(本末倒置)
E 2003.1 It pays to be honest
--〉社会上不诚实，欺诈的现象越来越多(如果正面不好发挥，则反其道行之)。(欺诈现象的具体：学校，商场，人才市场等等)。
The world is becoming less honest(世人越来越不诚实). People cheat in one form or anther(欺骗的方式形形色色). In schools, lazy students cheat to pass exams; in shops, greedy businessmen sell fake product (假货)to make dirty money; and in job fairs, desperate people make up experiences to win a chance.
从观点的多个层次描写：欺骗是饮鸩止渴。1，欺骗的初期能够带来额外利润然长期以往则是名声的损毁以及消费者的不认可 2，欺骗固然能够使人在特定的情况下逃出困境或者获益，但是需要用更多的欺骗来圆场，最终丧失人们的信任。
However common cheating is becoming, it does more harm than good to those who cheat(害人害己). To begin with, cheating can, to some extent, help you out of a difficult situation (帮助你摆脱困境)or brings benefits. However, as a proverb(谚语) goes “one lie necessarily leads to more ”(一个谎言需要更多的谎言来圆场), you need more lies to cover first lie(对前面谚语的解释). In the long run, you will lose trust from people around, above and below you.(你周围的人以及上下级) What’s more, cheating brings extra profits at the beginning yet erodes reputation(腐蚀名声) and costs you the faith of consumers in the end,(最终让你丧失客户的信任) as no one can cheat all the people all the time.
个人认为不能欺骗，有悖道德，害人害己。同时需要加强法律监督。
In my opinion, we should never cheat. Dishonesty runs against our traditional virtue (与传统美德相背离)and does harm to those who cheat. Meanwhile, we need to put in place powerful laws.
F 2003, 12 reduce waste on campus
--〉校园里浪费现象很严重(体现：食物，水龙头，电器，小馆子吃饭等等)
Waste problem increasingly stands out in schools.(浪费现象日益突出) In the canteen, students throw away more than they eat; in the washroom, the tap is never turned off; even in an empty classroom, the lights are always on. Similar examples have virtually become a staple on campus(类似的例子成了学校的一道风景线/举不胜举)
从观点的多个层次描写：浪费不好 1，资源有限，浪费普遍资源则后代倒霉
1， 养成不良习惯为以后的工作生活增加负担3，与节俭的传统美德相背离;在高等学府里浪费更是教育的耻辱。
Waste, whenever it happens, should be condemned (谴责)for the following reasons. Firstly, in this populous country(人口众多的国家), we have relatively limited resources. If we go on wasting human’s common resources, our decedents will suffer from hunger or even starve(挨饿). What’s more, such a behavior on campus will lead to a bad habit in your later work or life. Your expenses (花销)will rise as a result. Lat but not least, waste, on whatever occasion, goes against our traditional virtue(传统价值观) and puts to shame our education.(让我们的教育蒙羞)
个人认为浪费不好，需要共同努力，学校对学生说服教育，个人也要加强自觉。
From my point of view, waste is everything to be blamed. We need to join hands for the solution of this problem. The school should educate the students while the individuals should cooperate and behave themselves.
G 1996.6 health gained in developing countries(图标类文章不能生硬的简单描述。)
a 图标表明寿命从40-60短短30年涨了20年，比较而言，儿童死亡从-下降到--，降幅达到。什么促成了这个现象
As clearly stated in the graph, life expectancy increased dramatically, up from 40 to 60, in 30 years. By contrast, infant mortality dropped by 15%, down from 25% to 10% during the same period. What has contributed to this development?
从观点的多个层次描写：1，医疗技术的进展，治愈顽疾，抢救儿童2，生活水平的提高(吃住)，追求健康饮食和适当锻炼3 技术降低灾害的损失，其中妇女，儿童最倒霉。
First and foremost, the advance in medical science and technology has enabled us to cure many originally fatal diseases(治愈原本致命的疾病) and save millions of babies that could have died before, at or after birth. (出生前，出身时，出身后)The second reason has much to do with a good system(第二个原因与—有关) in which everyone is covered by timely medi-care(每个人享受免费医疗). What’s more, people now enjoy a happier life. No longer satisfied with a full stomach and warm clothing(不仅仅满足吃饱穿暖), we turn to a balanced diet (将注意力转向均衡饮食)and go in for physical exercises(参加体育运动). Last but not least, technology has reduced the occurrence /incidence (发生)of disasters as well as minimized the damages and injuries(姜损伤和危害降到最低). Otherwise, women and children would suffer most.
个人认为好现象，但是需要控制人口增长，否则前途未卜。来源：www.hxen.net
In my opinion, this means people can live a longer and better life. However, only god knows whether this is a curse or bless if the population explosion is not brought under control.
--〉大学费用越来越贵，学生来自不同收入的家庭，支付学费的方式不一而同。我的方式如何?--〉(怎么贵--占家庭开支比重上升;支付方式如何不同：打工，依赖父母)
College education fee is always on the increase. Generally, a higher percentage of family expense goes to education. With family background varying from person to person,(家庭背景应人而异) how students finance their education also differs. Some rely on working part-time, while others on parents. As for me, I depend on both.
从观点的多个层次描写(如果开始段落涉及观点可以融合，则最大程度上进行融合)：1，打工能够锻炼独立性，了解社会，为毕业以及学习动力做好准备2，大部分钱依靠父母，学生的主要职责是多学。
First and foremost, working part-time offers a chance to know the society well and develop your independence, thus supplying motivation for even harder work at school(为学校努力学习提供动力) and making preparations for graduation. Secondly but equally important, relying on parents for most of the education fee helps you overcome the worry of money (克服钱的麻烦)and the unnecessary disturbance of work(工作不必要的打扰), so that you can concentrate on your major task as a student: study.
个人认为最好是两者结合，要注意处理之间的关系，不能本末倒置。
As far as I am concerned, I will combine these two ways. However, they should be properly balanced. Most important, we should never put the cart before the horse.(本末倒置)
E 2003.1 It pays to be honest
--〉社会上不诚实，欺诈的现象越来越多(如果正面不好发挥，则反其道行之)。(欺诈现象的具体：学校，商场，人才市场等等)。
The world is becoming less honest(世人越来越不诚实). People cheat in one form or anther(欺骗的方式形形色色). In schools, lazy students cheat to pass exams; in shops, greedy businessmen sell fake product (假货)to make dirty money; and in job fairs, desperate people make up experiences to win a chance.
从观点的多个层次描写：欺骗是饮鸩止渴。1，欺骗的初期能够带来额外利润然长期以往则是名声的损毁以及消费者的不认可 2，欺骗固然能够使人在特定的情况下逃出困境或者获益，但是需要用更多的欺骗来圆场，最终丧失人们的信任。
However common cheating is becoming, it does more harm than good to those who cheat(害人害己). To begin with, cheating can, to some extent, help you out of a difficult situation (帮助你摆脱困境)or brings benefits. However, as a proverb(谚语) goes “one lie necessarily leads to more ”(一个谎言需要更多的谎言来圆场), you need more lies to cover first lie(对前面谚语的解释). In the long run, you will lose trust from people around, above and below you.(你周围的人以及上下级) What’s more, cheating brings extra profits at the beginning yet erodes reputation(腐蚀名声) and costs you the faith of consumers in the end,(最终让你丧失客户的信任) as no one can cheat all the people all the time.
个人认为不能欺骗，有悖道德，害人害己。同时需要加强法律监督。
In my opinion, we should never cheat. Dishonesty runs against our traditional virtue (与传统美德相背离)and does harm to those who cheat. Meanwhile, we need to put in place powerful laws.
F 2003, 12 reduce waste on campus
--〉校园里浪费现象很严重(体现：食物，水龙头，电器，小馆子吃饭等等)
Waste problem increasingly stands out in schools.(浪费现象日益突出) In the canteen, students throw away more than they eat; in the washroom, the tap is never turned off; even in an empty classroom, the lights are always on. Similar examples have virtually become a staple on campus(类似的例子成了学校的一道风景线/举不胜举)
从观点的多个层次描写：浪费不好 1，资源有限，浪费普遍资源则后代倒霉
1， 养成不良习惯为以后的工作生活增加负担3，与节俭的传统美德相背离;在高等学府里浪费更是教育的耻辱。
Waste, whenever it happens, should be condemned (谴责)for the following reasons. Firstly, in this populous country(人口众多的国家), we have relatively limited resources. If we go on wasting human’s common resources, our decedents will suffer from hunger or even starve(挨饿). What’s more, such a behavior on campus will lead to a bad habit in your later work or life. Your expenses (花销)will rise as a result. Lat but not least, waste, on whatever occasion, goes against our traditional virtue(传统价值观) and puts to shame our education.(让我们的教育蒙羞)
个人认为浪费不好，需要共同努力，学校对学生说服教育，个人也要加强自觉。
From my point of view, waste is everything to be blamed. We need to join hands for the solution of this problem. The school should educate the students while the individuals should cooperate and behave themselves.
G 1996.6 health gained in developing countries(图标类文章不能生硬的简单描述。)
a 图标表明寿命从40-60短短30年涨了20年，比较而言，儿童死亡从-下降到--，降幅达到。什么促成了这个现象
As clearly stated in the graph, life expectancy increased dramatically, up from 40 to 60, in 30 years. By contrast, infant mortality dropped by 15%, down from 25% to 10% during the same period. What has contributed to this development?
从观点的多个层次描写：1，医疗技术的进展，治愈顽疾，抢救儿童2，生活水平的提高(吃住)，追求健康饮食和适当锻炼3 技术降低灾害的损失，其中妇女，儿童最倒霉。
First and foremost, the advance in medical science and technology has enabled us to cure many originally fatal diseases(治愈原本致命的疾病) and save millions of babies that could have died before, at or after birth. (出生前，出身时，出身后)The second reason has much to do with a good system(第二个原因与—有关) in which everyone is covered by timely medi-care(每个人享受免费医疗). What’s more, people now enjoy a happier life. No longer satisfied with a full stomach and warm clothing(不仅仅满足吃饱穿暖), we turn to a balanced diet (将注意力转向均衡饮食)and go in for physical exercises(参加体育运动). Last but not least, technology has reduced the occurrence /incidence (发生)of disasters as well as minimized the damages and injuries(姜损伤和危害降到最低). Otherwise, women and children would suffer most.
个人认为好现象，但是需要控制人口增长，否则前途未卜。来源：www.hxen.net
In my opinion, this means people can live a longer and better life. However, only god knows whether this is a curse or bless if the population explosion is not brought under control.
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