2009年12月英语六级写作高分技法及范文

　　2 . 结论段的写作
　　结论一般采用归纳概括、主题重述或提建议等方式。
　　常见的方式有：
　　1 ) 重述或总结主题
　　重述主题指于结论处以另外一种表达方式重申主题，与首段照应。
　　Families offer us warmth and care. Friends give us strength and horizon. They both help us understand the world as it is. Both of them are the dearest parts in our life.
　　2 ) 提出建议
　　Since postcards do us more harm and good, since we have many other ways to convey our feelings and promote our friendship, I hope everyone will take actions now to stop using postcards.
　　3 ) 概括总结
　　As we can see from the above, living in the suburb we can stay away from pollution, lead an easy leisure time, and needn't invest too much money, so I prefer living in the suburb to living in the city.
　　4 ) 引用名人名言
　　In particular, I enjoy what Francis Bacon said "Studies serve for delight, for ornament and for ability."
　　5) 综合法
　　与首段一样，结论段也可以是多种方法的综合。一般说来，总结加建议的比较多。
　　尾段示例 1 ：
　　如 " 网络 " 的结论段可以如下所示：
　　10 ) As we all know, the next century will become one of the Internet. Internet will become more and more important in both our daily life and our work. So I suggest that schoolchildren should start using the Internet.
　　11 ) So I think schoolchildren not only can start using the Internet, but also should start using it They are sure to benefit a lot from the internet.
　　12 ) Internet can help our children know the world, get useful information and enrich their knowledge. So I think schoolchildren can start using the Internet.
　　13 ) In a word (In conclusion/ In summary/ To sum up / In short), the Internet is playing a more and more important role in our life and it is helpful for children's growth both physically and mentally. It is better for them to start using the Internet as early as possible.
　　3 .转承语的使用
　　根据不同的段落要求，选择适当的转承语
　　1) 比较对照
　　比较： like A, B …
　　Just as A, B …
　　A, similarly/correspondingly, likewise/in the same way, B …
　　对照： Unlike/ Contrary to/ As opposed to A, B …
　　A , however/on the other hand/in contrast, B ..
　　A … , B, however/on the other hand/in contrast, …
　　2) 列举
　　First/ Second (Next) / Third (Then)/ Last (Finally), …
　　The fist/ The second/ The third/ The last (The final)
　　Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly/Last(Finally)
　　One/Another/Still another/The last
　　The most essential/most important/primary/chief is …
　　3) 因果
　　as a result, consequently, therefore, hence, so, because of this, for these reasons, due to the fact that
　　4 起承转合常用语
　　1 ) " 起 " 的常用语
　　When asked about/ When it comes to/ Faced with … , some people
　　claim/think/argue/believe that … , but/while others … (differently)
　　Nowadays there is much/general discussion as to … .
　　With the development/improvement/growth of …,
　　Now, it is commonly/widely/increasingly believed/thought/held/acknowledge that …,
　　According to a recent survey/investigation/poll, …
　　Have you ever thought/wondered …?
　　Suppose …
　　As the saying goes, …
　　2) " 承 " 的常用语
　　Those who hold … .
　　It is true that …
　　To be sure ..
　　First/Firstly …
　　The main/leading/underlying/root/ primary/chief/essential ….
　　" 承接上文 " 的方式与文章的段落结构有关，比较的与列举的不同，与举例的也不同。同学们应根据具体的情况选择适当的承接语。
　　3 ) " 转 " 的常用语
　　It sounds like a good(attractive) idea (suggestion), but they fail to understand (see, notice
　　There is probably an element of truth in the arguments (ideas), but they ignore a more important (basic) fact …
　　Closer examination (analysis), however, suggests (shows) that this argument (claim, idea) may not be borne of (supported) by the following evidence (facts, examples, statistics).
　　Close (careful) examination (analysis) of these arguments (ideas, suggestions), however, would reveal (suggest, prove) how flimsy ( 不足信的，不严密 )(fallacious (靠不住的) , groundless (没有根据的) ) they are.
　　However logical (sound, forcible( 有说服力 )) these arguments may be, they don't make sense (only skim the surface of the problem) when … is viewed the other way (taken into consideration).
　　As opposed to (Contrary to) the widely (commonly, generally) held idea (belief, view), new studies (facts) challenge (fail to justify) the opinion (view).
　　Good/Superior/Wonderful as … ., it has its own disadvantages/ it brings its own problems.
　　They may be right about … , but they seem to neglect /fail to mention/take into account …
　　In all the discussion and debate over …, one important/basic fact is ignored/overlooked/neglected.
　　It is true that/ Admittedly, but it is unlikely/doesn't follow/doesn't mean that …
　　There is an element of truth in these arguments/statements, but they ignore a deeper and more basic/essential/important fact/factor …
　　In many cases, however, …
　　As far as .. is concerned, …
　　4) " 合 " 的常用语 来源: 和谐英语学习网 Www.hxen.net
　　Experience/Evidence/All the facts suggest/show/demonstrate/ indicate that …
　　From what has been discussed above/Taking into account all these factors, we may safely draw/reach/come to/arrive/ the conclusion that …
　　In conclusion/To sum up/In summary/In short/To conclude ….
　　It is important/necessary/essential that effective/proper/powerful actions/measure/remedies should be taken to …