2009年6月英语六级作文预测及范文(三)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Attitude towards Examination. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
　　1)人们对待考试一直褒贬不一
　　2)你怎样看待考试，为什么?
　　3)提出你的建议　
　　The Attitude towards Examination _______________________________________________________________________________
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　　行文思路
　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个有争议的话题，提纲第2点要求谈谈“我”对其的态度，提纲第3点要求提出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：通过大学考试引出人们对待考试的不同态度;表明“我”对考试的态度，并说明理由;针对考试提出“我”的建议。
　　高分范文
　　The Attitude towards Examination
　　[1]There are always many arguments about the advantages and disadvantages of examination. Some people think examination is the only best way to test how examinees have mastered what they have studied. [2]However, still others hold the opposite opinion. They argue that examination can’t measure how the students have really studied. They say it can do [3]nothing but burden the students.
　　[4]As for me, I think the examination is very useful to both teachers and students. [4]On the one hand, examination can help teachers check how much students have learned about a subject and thus know what should be their teaching focus. [4]On the other hand, [5]as far as students are concerned, by examination, they can [6]not only know how they have studied [6]but also find out what they haven’t mastered well. [4]Thus, they could improve their studying method so as to make greater progress.
　　[4]Of course, examination is not the only way to measure one’s ability. [4]Also, too many examinations are a burden on both teachers and students. [4]But, in sum, the examination [7]does more good than harm. Therefore, I think the correct attitude towards examination should be to [8]take full advantage of it and avoid its disadvantage.
　　【亮点点评】
　　[1]用于表示某事存在争议。
　　[2]用于引出对立观点。
　　[3]“仅仅，只是”。
　　[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
　　[5]“就…而言”。
　　[6]用于连接并列成分。
　　[7]“利大于弊”。
　　[8]“扬长避短”。
　　佳句临摹
　　1.佳句：They say it can do nothing but burden the students.
　　临摹：最终，不诚实只会带来麻烦。
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　　2.佳句：Examination can help teachers check how much students have learned about a subject and thus know what should be their teaching focus.
　　临摹：一些学生可能会把假期的大部分时间都用来娱乐，而因此荒废了学业。
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　　3.佳句：
　　佳句：They can not only know how they have studied but also find out what they haven’t mastered well.
　　临摹：人们不仅需要生活必需品，还想生活得舒适。
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　　【KEY】
　　1. In the end, dishonesty brings nothing but troubles.
　　2. Some students might spend most of their holiday time on amusement, and thus leave their study neglected.
　　3. People not only need the basic necessities of life, but also want to live comfortably.