2009年6月英语六级作文预测及范文(九)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic What does Modern Science Bring us? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
　　1)科学究竟带给我们什么?这个问题一直备受争议
　　2)很多人认为科学带来了很多问题，比如污染、核武器 　
　　3)你对此的看法是…
　　What Does Modern Science Bring us?
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　　行文思路
　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个有争议的话题，提纲第2点针对该话题提出一种反面观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出关于科学的争议，简单阐述科学带来的问题;表明“我”对科学的正面看法，阐述科学带给我们的好处;得出结论：科学发展利大于弊。
　　高分范文
　　What Does Modern Science Bring us?
　　The question “What does modern science bring us?” has always [1]provoked great debate. Some people argue that science should [2]been responsible for pollution and has brought us the nuclear bomb that threatens our existence. [3]In addition, they point out that cloning has shaken the foundation of moral codes.
　　[3]However, [4]compared with the negative aspects, [5]I think, the blessing of science is more evident. As we see, the vast improvements made in the field of medicine have served to lengthen our life expectancy and to reduce the rate of infant morality. [3]What’s more, the discovery of mechanization, better seeds, better technique of irrigation and pest control has worked to increase the productivity levels on farms. As to transportation, the railway, modern ocean liner, jet plane, and motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, [6]as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development. [3]Besides, the invention of the computer has assisted a lot in our life and work.
　　[3]In general, [7]the advantages of science far outweigh its disadvantages. And in most cases, [8]it is not science itself but human beings’ misuse of it that brings us undesirable results. [3]Therefore, [9]it is no doubt that we should continue developing science and [10]take full advantage of it.
　　【亮点点评】
　　[1]“引起极大的争议”。
　　[2]“对…负责，是…的原因”。
　　[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
　　[4]“与…相比”，过去分词短语作状语。
　　[5]“插入语”。
　　[6]“也，还”，表示并列。
　　[7]“利大于弊”。
　　[8]强调句型，此处强调的是not…but连接的并列主语。
　　[9]“毫无疑问”。
　　[10]“充分利用”。
　　佳句临摹
　　1.佳句：Compared with the negative aspects, I think, the blessing of science is more evident.
　　临摹：我认为，与传统的字典相比，电子字典携带和使用起来更加方便。
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　　2.佳句：Motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development.
　　临摹：了解一个人，我们可以看他交什么样的朋友，也可以看他读什么样的书。
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　　3.佳句：It is not science itself but human beings’ misuse of it that brings us undesirable results.
　　临摹：一个人的成功不是取决于他的外貌而是取决于他的能力。
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　　【KEY】
　　1. Compared with traditional dictionaries, I think, electronic dictionaries are more convenient to carry and use.
　　2. A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps.
　　3. It is not one’s appearance but his capability that decides his final success.