2009年12月英语六级作文范文(恩波)
2009-12-17来源:和谐英语
（八）
The Rise of Shanzhai Culture
1. 最近兴起了一股“山寨热”
2. 你如何看待山寨现象
● 审题概述●
本文是一篇论述山寨现象以及人们和你对此看法的文章。第一段，概述方兴未艾的山寨
热。第二段，阐述山寨产品的优势以及给人们带来的好处。第三段，论述人们和你对山寨现象的反对立场和观点，即山寨产品的非法性。
【范文】
l The Rise of Shanzhai Culture
The vast array of knockoff name-brand products, such as cell phones, DVDs, MP3 players, have made “shanzhai” the hottest word of the year. Now we wear shanzhai watches, talk through shanzhai cell phones, play shanzhai video games, use shanzhai computers, even watch shanzhai TV shows. Once a term used before some electronic products to suggest a copycat version of inferior quality, shanzhai now suggests to many Chinese creativity and trendiness. With the media all over the rise of shanzhai culture, public opinions are clearly divided.
Advocates invariably associate it with innovation, stylishness, the DIY spirit, open-mindedness and practicality, as shanzhai products often mix imitation with innovation – a similar skin but a different heart. The end products are usually more functional and much cheaper than the original. Besides, they respond to the market more swiftly and they are more considerate in design. Thanks to them, more people at the grassroots level can enjoy the benefit of modern technology.
However, other people, including myself, hold more reserved attitudes towards the shanzhai fever. For all the popularity it has won, a copycat is a copycat. The mockery of the prestige products not only steals their profits but also upsets market competition. Moreover, shanzhai products thrive on the current legal loopholes. Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans, they make illegal profits by violating intellectual property rights and evading taxes. And to top it off, the so-called innovation is only senseless talk as true innovation always faces huge costs and potential failures, while plagiarism simply builds success on other people’s risks.
◇第一段思路点评：
综述山寨热现象。
◇语言点提示：
…public opinions are clearly divided此句起承上启下的作用
◇第二段思路点评：
主要阐述山寨产品的优势。
◇语言点提示：
（1）mix imitation with innovation混淆模仿与创新
（2）respond to the market对市场做出反应
◇第三段思路点评：
主要阐述对山寨产品侵权、扰乱市场等方面的看法。
◇语言点提示：
（1）The mockery of the prestige products拙劣地模仿名牌
（2）thrive on茁壮成长、蓬勃发展、繁荣
（3）legal loopholes法律漏洞（空子）
（4）Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans在反垄断口号的伪装下
（5）violating intellectual property rights违反知识产权
（6）evading taxes逃税
（7）plagiarism剽窃、抄袭
（九）
It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy
1. 盗版软件比比皆是
2. 盗版软件猖獗的原因
3. 如何打击盗版软件
● 审题概述●
这是一篇主要论述盗版软件猖獗原因和打击盗版软件的措施的文章。第一段，概述中国
盗版软件泛滥的情况。第二段，重点分析盗版软件猖獗的主要原因。第三段，侧重阐述打击盗版软件的措施。
【范文】
l It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy
China has often been criticized for the rampant practice of software piracy. Take a look around. We operate on pirated Windows systems, defend PC security with pirated Kaspersky anti-virus programmes, process files with pirated Microsoft Office, draft 3D designs with pirated AutoCAD, refine pictures with pirated Adobe Photoshop, and study English with pirated Kingsoft’s electronic dictionaries and translators. It’s no exaggeration that pirated software is everywhere.
The logic behind the phenomenon is simple and clear: if a pirated copy is available for just a tiny fraction of the normal price, not to speak of many of the free downloads online, who would pay for an authentic copy? Cheaper prices aside, easy access is another important factor. With such a large gathering of pirated upgrades around, who would bother to spend time and money searching the stores for an authorized yet outdated version?
Despite these apparent benefits, the practice of software piracy should be banned, because it represents unfair competition and by nature it’s a no-win situation. But how? Two approaches are to be taken at the same time: Technically, software developers should enhance their antipiracy engineering, so that cracking the software should be virtually impossible. And legally, the government should also tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties, so that violations should be costly.
◇第一段思路点评：
概述中国盗版软件泛滥的现状。
◇语言点提示：
the rampant practice of software piracy猖獗的盗版软件
◇第二段思路点评：
论述盗版软件猖獗的原因。来源：和谐英语
◇语言点提示：
（1）downloads online 在线下载
（2）authentic copy正版
◇第三段思路点评：
阐述打击盗版软件的具体做法，包括软件商和政府采取的应对措施。
◇语言点提示：
tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties加强反盗版立法和盗版惩罚
The Rise of Shanzhai Culture
1. 最近兴起了一股“山寨热”
2. 你如何看待山寨现象
● 审题概述●
本文是一篇论述山寨现象以及人们和你对此看法的文章。第一段，概述方兴未艾的山寨
热。第二段，阐述山寨产品的优势以及给人们带来的好处。第三段，论述人们和你对山寨现象的反对立场和观点，即山寨产品的非法性。
【范文】
l The Rise of Shanzhai Culture
The vast array of knockoff name-brand products, such as cell phones, DVDs, MP3 players, have made “shanzhai” the hottest word of the year. Now we wear shanzhai watches, talk through shanzhai cell phones, play shanzhai video games, use shanzhai computers, even watch shanzhai TV shows. Once a term used before some electronic products to suggest a copycat version of inferior quality, shanzhai now suggests to many Chinese creativity and trendiness. With the media all over the rise of shanzhai culture, public opinions are clearly divided.
Advocates invariably associate it with innovation, stylishness, the DIY spirit, open-mindedness and practicality, as shanzhai products often mix imitation with innovation – a similar skin but a different heart. The end products are usually more functional and much cheaper than the original. Besides, they respond to the market more swiftly and they are more considerate in design. Thanks to them, more people at the grassroots level can enjoy the benefit of modern technology.
However, other people, including myself, hold more reserved attitudes towards the shanzhai fever. For all the popularity it has won, a copycat is a copycat. The mockery of the prestige products not only steals their profits but also upsets market competition. Moreover, shanzhai products thrive on the current legal loopholes. Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans, they make illegal profits by violating intellectual property rights and evading taxes. And to top it off, the so-called innovation is only senseless talk as true innovation always faces huge costs and potential failures, while plagiarism simply builds success on other people’s risks.
◇第一段思路点评：
综述山寨热现象。
◇语言点提示：
…public opinions are clearly divided此句起承上启下的作用
◇第二段思路点评：
主要阐述山寨产品的优势。
◇语言点提示：
（1）mix imitation with innovation混淆模仿与创新
（2）respond to the market对市场做出反应
◇第三段思路点评：
主要阐述对山寨产品侵权、扰乱市场等方面的看法。
◇语言点提示：
（1）The mockery of the prestige products拙劣地模仿名牌
（2）thrive on茁壮成长、蓬勃发展、繁荣
（3）legal loopholes法律漏洞（空子）
（4）Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans在反垄断口号的伪装下
（5）violating intellectual property rights违反知识产权
（6）evading taxes逃税
（7）plagiarism剽窃、抄袭
（九）
It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy
1. 盗版软件比比皆是
2. 盗版软件猖獗的原因
3. 如何打击盗版软件
● 审题概述●
这是一篇主要论述盗版软件猖獗原因和打击盗版软件的措施的文章。第一段，概述中国
盗版软件泛滥的情况。第二段，重点分析盗版软件猖獗的主要原因。第三段，侧重阐述打击盗版软件的措施。
【范文】
l It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy
China has often been criticized for the rampant practice of software piracy. Take a look around. We operate on pirated Windows systems, defend PC security with pirated Kaspersky anti-virus programmes, process files with pirated Microsoft Office, draft 3D designs with pirated AutoCAD, refine pictures with pirated Adobe Photoshop, and study English with pirated Kingsoft’s electronic dictionaries and translators. It’s no exaggeration that pirated software is everywhere.
The logic behind the phenomenon is simple and clear: if a pirated copy is available for just a tiny fraction of the normal price, not to speak of many of the free downloads online, who would pay for an authentic copy? Cheaper prices aside, easy access is another important factor. With such a large gathering of pirated upgrades around, who would bother to spend time and money searching the stores for an authorized yet outdated version?
Despite these apparent benefits, the practice of software piracy should be banned, because it represents unfair competition and by nature it’s a no-win situation. But how? Two approaches are to be taken at the same time: Technically, software developers should enhance their antipiracy engineering, so that cracking the software should be virtually impossible. And legally, the government should also tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties, so that violations should be costly.
◇第一段思路点评：
概述中国盗版软件泛滥的现状。
◇语言点提示：
the rampant practice of software piracy猖獗的盗版软件
◇第二段思路点评：
论述盗版软件猖獗的原因。来源：和谐英语
◇语言点提示：
（1）downloads online 在线下载
（2）authentic copy正版
◇第三段思路点评：
阐述打击盗版软件的具体做法，包括软件商和政府采取的应对措施。
◇语言点提示：
tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties加强反盗版立法和盗版惩罚
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