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英语满分作文七大原则和25句闪光句

2015-01-22来源:和谐英语

英语满分作文七大原则和25句闪光句

一、长短句原则
  工作还得一张一驰呢,老让批改老师读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is tomeet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy theintellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar。
  如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
  强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二、主题句原则
  国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
  特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fullyprepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, youcan hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly。

三、一二三原则
  领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
  1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
  2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
  3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
  4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
  5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
  6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
  7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
  8)most important of all, moreover, finally
  9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
  10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
  建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!

四、短语优先原则
  写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:
  其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章比如奇速英语亮点五句箴言定会得高分了。
  其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
  I cannot bear it。 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it。
  I want it。 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it。
  这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。

五、多实少虚原则
  原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting,smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
  走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
  但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
  美女走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
  小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
  老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
  所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!

六、多变句式原则
  1)加法(串联)
  都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
  I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar。
  如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
  Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm。
  其它的短语可以用:
  besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
  2)转折(拐弯抹角)
  批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。奇速英语APP每日时文天天读,所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
  The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition。
  The coat was thin, but it was warm。
  更多的短语:despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of,despite,notwithstanding
  3)因果(so, so, so)
  昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
  The snow began to fall, so we went home。
  更多短语:
  then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result,for this reason, so that
  4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
  有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
  举例:This is what I can do。
  Whether he can go with us or not is not sure。
  同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
  When to go, Why he goes away…
  5)附加(多此一举)
  如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
  The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine。
  I don’t enjoy that book you are reading。
  Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going。
  其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whomor that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
  6)排比(排山倒海句)
  文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
  Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated orsimple, there is plenty in London for you。
  Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such asoil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides。
  We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, torealize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
  要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
  七、挑战极限原则
  既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
  原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
  The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climbthe Western Hills.
  Africa is the second largest continent, its size being aboutthree times that of China.

25句满分英语作文常见闪光句
  1.According to a recent survey,four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.
  依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。
  2.The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.
  最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。
  3.No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.
  没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。
  4.People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.
  人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。
  5.An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.
  越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。
  6.When it comes to education,the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.
  说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。
  7.Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.
  许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。
  8.Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.
  应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。
  9.An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However,this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents,who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems.
  越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题。
  10.Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus,which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.
  许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少,以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车,而车上可能已满载乘客。
  11.There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem:the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.
  无可否认,空气污染是一个极其严重的问题:城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。
  12.An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.
  一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。
  13.A proper part-time job does not occupy students' too much time. In fact,it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes:All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
  一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻。
  14.Any government,which is blind to this point,may pay a heavy price.
  任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。
  15.Nowadays,many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately,for most young people,it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.
  当前,一提到即将开始的学校生活,许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而,对多数年轻人来说,校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。
  16.In view of the seriousness of this problem,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.
  考虑到问题的严重性,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施。
  17.The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.
  大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
  18.It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.
  无可争辩,现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。
  19.Although this view is wildly held,this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.
  尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。
  20.No one can deny the fact that a person's education is the most important aspect of his life.
  没有人可以否认,一个人的教育是人生最重要的一方面。
  21.People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.
  人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。
  22.In the last decades,advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.
  在过去的几十年,先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。
  23.In fact,we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.
  事实上,我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。
  24.We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
  我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。
  25.People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.
  人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。