我最喜欢的节日my favorite festival

My favorite festival is Christmas Day. It’s not thetrditional for Chinese. It’s for the foreigners, which Christmas Day is to themwhat Spring Festival is us. But with the development of the society, more andmore foreigners come to China. And then it is popular in China. I feel excitedto see the Cristmas decoration and Christmas trees. I also like Santa Claus,who will give Christmas present for us under the table. And people will say ”MerryCristmas” to each other on that day. It is wonderful to have a foreignfestival.

我最喜欢的节日是圣诞节。它不是中国的传统节日。是外国的。圣诞节对于他们来说就像是春节对于我们一样。随着社会的发展，越来越多的外国人来到 中国。之后圣诞节在中国也流行起来了。看到圣诞装饰和圣诞树我会感到很兴奋。我也喜欢圣诞老人，他会悄悄的给我们圣诞礼物。在那一天人们会互相说圣诞快乐来打招呼。过一个国外的节日真的很美妙。

点评：圣诞节是为了纪念耶稣的牺牲。with是介词介词后跟的是名词所以发展要用名词形式development而不是动词形式develop。under the table字面为在桌底下，所以它的意思是秘密