2009年6月英语四级作文预测及范文(十)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 　
　　1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”
　　2)产生这一现象的原因
　　3)你的看法
　　Certificate Craze On Campus 
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　　行文思路
　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。
　　高分范文
　　Certificate Craze On Campus
　　In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear?
　　[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.
　　[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value.
　　【亮点点评】
　　[1]祈使句使用恰当。randomly意为“随意地，随机地”。
　　[2]限定词使用恰当，使文章表达更严谨，增强了说服力。
　　[3]that引导同位语从句，修饰the idea。
　　[4]设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。
　　[5]强调句型，此处是强调主语。
　　[6]which引导非限制性定语从句，充当介词宾语。
　　[7]用于引出“我”的观点。
　　[8]“当谈到或提及…时”。
　　[9]since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为“既然”。
　　[10]“只是，仅仅”。“而不是”。
　　佳句临摩
　　1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.
　　临摩：离婚率上升尽管令人难过，但却是不争的事实。
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　　2.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability.
　　临摩： 在过去的三十年，发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步，其中包括健康水平的提高。
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　　3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates.
　　临摩：我认为，对于我们来说，更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书。
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　　【KEY】
　　1. It is a sad but true fact that divorce rate is on the rise.
　　2. In the past three decades, developing countries have made great progress in many aspects, among which are the improvements in health domain.
　　3. From my point of view, it is more important for us to enhance our practical abilities but not to get more certificates.