2008年9月6号雅思(ielts)A类作文解析
2008-10-17来源:
和谐英语雅思站点编辑整理
小作文是描述和比较2个不同时期的石器的一些情况一个是14million year ago, anther one is 800000 year ago每个石器给了3张照片 front view side view back view第一个像个米粒形状，粗糙一点，第二个像水更尖更精细。
小作文这次考得很变态，实际上，很多考生都觉得无法入手，对于我们来说，考试时候的心态最主要的是不要慌张，不管什么题目都要认真的有秩序的去做就可以。这个题目可以写成三段：
1.介绍主题，把题目里能抄的句子先抄一遍，记得要做些改动。
2.介绍第一块石头，按照的顺序是形状，大小（要指出比例尺）和年代，用上1-2句长句，句型要有变化。
3.介绍第二块石头，顺序同上，加上1-2句和第一块石头比较的内容，这样就算是前后有关联了。
大作文题目：Once children start school, the teachers would have more influence in their intellectual and social development than parents. In what extent do you agree or disagree?
这个题目本身不是很难，属于中规中矩的教育类题目，关键词我在新东方课上也说过，比较级一般都是关键词，还有就是比较的方面也不少，有智力和社会的比较，所以我们同意任一方都可以从智力和社会的方面去写老师和家长的比较，这样其实可写的东西就很多。还有的写法就是可以分别去比较，例如老师当然是给学生智力的因素多，而家长给学生社会交际的影响多，总之，要自圆其说，言之成理就可以。下面是我的文章，给各位参考。
范文：和谐英语论坛
Parents would find themselves well-expressed in their young kids’ early periods of life, during which time they are identical reflection of their parents in many regards. However, this situation no longer lasts after their entrance to schools, even primary school, they will get much greater influence from their teachers and peers, especially from their teachers and this kind of influence can be ever-lasting. We can find this as true from following respects:
First of all, teachers can influence children in intellectual aspects in most of their school age. Kids have to spend most of their time in schools, together with many teachers in various disciplines, their major period at home is their holidays, which is quite negligible compared with their normal school life. Therefore, parents are no peers when compared with teachers in school in this regard.
Also, due to the longevity of their company with children, teachers can significantly influence the social behaviors of children quite multifariously. Schools are no isolated peoples’ exile, but a place where kids of similar age learn how to get along well with others. Thus in many cases, parents can never have the chances to deal with the social problems kids encounter at school. But teachers are professional in this regard and they are also psychologically trained to cope with many situations that parents can not even dream of. Parents can be the most intimate one to listen to their children’s confession, but they can never be as omniscient and omnipotent as teachers at school.
Thus, we can see quite clear that teachers can exert greater impacts on children in both intellectual and social respects due to their long stay with the young.
和谐英语 和谐英语
小作文是描述和比较2个不同时期的石器的一些情况一个是14million year ago, anther one is 800000 year ago每个石器给了3张照片 front view side view back view第一个像个米粒形状，粗糙一点，第二个像水更尖更精细。
小作文这次考得很变态，实际上，很多考生都觉得无法入手，对于我们来说，考试时候的心态最主要的是不要慌张，不管什么题目都要认真的有秩序的去做就可以。这个题目可以写成三段：
1.介绍主题，把题目里能抄的句子先抄一遍，记得要做些改动。
2.介绍第一块石头，按照的顺序是形状，大小（要指出比例尺）和年代，用上1-2句长句，句型要有变化。
3.介绍第二块石头，顺序同上，加上1-2句和第一块石头比较的内容，这样就算是前后有关联了。
大作文题目：Once children start school, the teachers would have more influence in their intellectual and social development than parents. In what extent do you agree or disagree?
这个题目本身不是很难，属于中规中矩的教育类题目，关键词我在新东方课上也说过，比较级一般都是关键词，还有就是比较的方面也不少，有智力和社会的比较，所以我们同意任一方都可以从智力和社会的方面去写老师和家长的比较，这样其实可写的东西就很多。还有的写法就是可以分别去比较，例如老师当然是给学生智力的因素多，而家长给学生社会交际的影响多，总之，要自圆其说，言之成理就可以。下面是我的文章，给各位参考。
范文：和谐英语论坛
Parents would find themselves well-expressed in their young kids’ early periods of life, during which time they are identical reflection of their parents in many regards. However, this situation no longer lasts after their entrance to schools, even primary school, they will get much greater influence from their teachers and peers, especially from their teachers and this kind of influence can be ever-lasting. We can find this as true from following respects:
First of all, teachers can influence children in intellectual aspects in most of their school age. Kids have to spend most of their time in schools, together with many teachers in various disciplines, their major period at home is their holidays, which is quite negligible compared with their normal school life. Therefore, parents are no peers when compared with teachers in school in this regard.
Also, due to the longevity of their company with children, teachers can significantly influence the social behaviors of children quite multifariously. Schools are no isolated peoples’ exile, but a place where kids of similar age learn how to get along well with others. Thus in many cases, parents can never have the chances to deal with the social problems kids encounter at school. But teachers are professional in this regard and they are also psychologically trained to cope with many situations that parents can not even dream of. Parents can be the most intimate one to listen to their children’s confession, but they can never be as omniscient and omnipotent as teachers at school.
Thus, we can see quite clear that teachers can exert greater impacts on children in both intellectual and social respects due to their long stay with the young.
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