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雅思大作文常见论点趣解

2009-03-03来源:和谐英语

  三、权利和平等
  西方的文化在一定程度上可以浓缩为:权利、平等和自由。中国考生在人们该不该做什么事情或行为的时候应该多从这个方面去说服考官。
  如果写到动物的保护问题时,可以说:Animals are not created for humans any more than women are created for men, black for white.
  在写到政府是否该花钱来发展武器时,可以说:There is no doubt that the advancement of military technologies is one of the greatest dangers to all human rights, including the most basic right to life itself.
  在写到环境的重要性时,可以说:
  All human beings have the fundamental right to an environment adequate for their health and well-being.
  在写到小孩子是否应该对自己犯的罪负责时,可以说:
  When someone turns 18, he or she should be tried as an adult because they have adult rights. Children, however, do not have the same rights as adults do. Then, if a five-year-old child killing someone has been sentenced the death penalty, the trial that determines whether or not someone should be tried as an adult are absurd.
  在写到传统的西方道德中对私有财产的尊重时,可以说:
  Respect for property is no less important than respect for person. Indeed, respect for property is one species of respect for person. Property is the stuff of personal independence. It is, therefore, an economic foundation of freedom. A society in which respect for property diminishes is one in which freedom diminishes.
  四、个人国家
  有时候,一个现象或问题的出现是由于个人的努力和汗水或个人的疏忽,以及社会国家重视或政府的政策不恰当而导致的。例如:
  运动员是否应该拿高薪:
  Athletes sweat and sacrifice physically and psychologically more than the average people, which can justify their high salary.
  青少年犯罪的原因:
  Young people’s inexperience and gullibility easily lead then into traps. (个人的原因) 
  The government failing to establish supporting system to offer help to adolescents can explain this social issue. (国家的原因) 
  在男女平等的意义上使用个人和国家的分析角度也是很有效的:
  Every woman is worthy to be respected, educated, and safe from exploitation. It is our responsibility and right to pray, promote, and protect the human and divine rights of all. The world"s stability and prosperity depend on it.
  The full and equal participation of women in all spheres of life is essential to social and economic development, the abolition of war, and the ultimate establishment of a united world.
  五、文化和道德
  文化和道德本来就是雅思作文中较难的两个话题,而近来这两个话题考的频率又很高。考生不防也从这两个角度来准备一下主体段落的观点。
  反对强势文化入侵:
  Globalization might undermine cultural diversity. Multinational corporations promote a certain kind of consumerist culture, in which standard commodities, promoted by global marketing campaigns exploiting basic material desires, create similar lifestyles, which is so-called Coca-Colanization.
  该不该撒谎:
  The dishonest practice of telling lies will produce a perverse impact on one’s personality.
  总之,在大作文的主体段落写作过程中,考生可以将以上的思路结合题目的特点综合应用,切忌生搬硬套。平时在读文章时也要多总结别人的观点角度,而后为我所用。这样定能让你逐渐形成西方的思维习惯,在考试中能才思泉涌,下笔有神。