雅思写作真题高分范文

　　重点词句解析
　　motivate
　　v.激发
　　He is genuinely motivated by a desire to help people.
　　consequently
　　adv.从而, 因此
　　I spent most of my money in the first week and consequently had very little to eat by the end of the holiday.
　　critical
　　adj. 重要的
　　The President's support is critical (to this project).
　　ideal
　　adj.理想的, 完美的, 想象的, 观念的, 唯心论的
　　The television also comes in a compact 36 cm screen size, ideal for bedroom or kitchen use.
　　promotion
　　n.促进, 提拔, 晋升
　　The job offers excellent promotion prospects.
　　secondary
　　adj. 第二的;第二位的,附属的
　　Many older people still believe that women's careers are secondary.
　　fulfillment
　　n. 满足(感),成就(感)
　　People find fulfillment in working for a common goal.
　　several key factors are critical for…
　　在“分析解决”型的雅思议论文写作中，几乎都会需要写到“有几条因素导致……的问题”这样的概念，范文中的这个句式值得读者学习：
　　Consequently, finding a satisfying and motivating job is essential for improving an individual’s overall quality of life, and several key factors are thought to be critical for an employee to achieve job satisfaction.
　　critical也可以用essential代替，例如：
　　Three factors are essential for keeping your bones healthy throughout your life