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2010年3月6日雅思写作G类书信范文与评析

2010-03-12来源:和谐英语
  You would like to work overseas, write a letter to a job agent company, tell it:
  a) what job you would like to apply to
  b) what companies are you looking for
  c) why do you want to work overseas
  Dear Sir or Madam,来源:http://www.hxen.net
  I’m writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Shanghai Daily for the position of overseas mechanical engineer on Mon. Feb.23.
  I would like to apply for this post. I graduated with a Master’s degree in Machine-Building and Electronics Industries in Tsinghua University in 1999 and began my career in Zhongshan ABB Company as a young mechanical engineer. In 2006, I was promoted to be the chief engineer, taking charge of the projects in Southeast Asia. I have been seeking for chances overseas in my majored domain in the hope that I can develop my potential further.
  If possible, I would like to choose a mechanical company with good reputation located in Chicago. I would also prefer small private companies which allow me to enjoy a larger space of promotion.
  The reason I made the decision above is that my husband has recently been relocated to Chicago by his company and I am, therefore, seeking a position in the same area in Chicago.
  I have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experience as well as an open letter of recommendation from my former employer.
  Please give me a feedback at your earliest convenience if my qualifications meet your requirements.
  I look forward to hearing from you soon.
  Yours sincerely,
  Lucy Liu
  专家点评:
  本次书信考察内容为申请信,申请的内容为工作。对于多数已经有工作经验的G类考生来说比较简单。
  在回答题目的过程中,考生需注意以下三点:
  1. 一定要将题目中所问的问题回答完整;
  2. 编撰的细节要显得真实;
  3. 由于是申请信,因此在用词方面需要比较正式且有礼貌;
  本次所选范文已经完成了以上三点要求,在语汇使用上面也比较符合书信的要求,不失为一篇好的申请信类的范文。