,2013年6月22日雅思写作分析与范文参考

　　小作文：

　　关于三个城市1990人口、在1990年预测2000的人口和2000实际人口。

　　分析：这道题同学们要特别注意2000年的预测使用的时态，不是is predicted,或will 而是was predicted，或would, 因为这是1990年对2000的预测，即过去对过去的预测。

　　动态图。横向写趋势，同时纵向对比。

　　The data in the table illustrate the population in 1990 in three major cities in the world, the prediction for 2000 and the actual figures.

　　There were 15 million people in San Paulo in 1990 and the number was predicted to increase dramatically to 24m in 2000. But the actual figure was only 18m, which was not as substantial as that forecast.

　　Jakarta was the home of 9.5m people in 1990, much fewer than San Paulo. Similarly to San Paulo, there was also projected to be a significant growth (to 14m) in the number of Jakarta inhabitants in 2000. However, the growth in reality turned out to be moderate, to 11.5m.

　　In contrast to the upward trend in both Jakarta and San Paulo, the population in Shanghai showed an unexpected decline during the same decade. Shanghai was inhabited by 13.5m people in 1990 and a rise to 17m was projected to be seen in 2000. However, the actual figure (12.5m) was surprisingly lower instead of higher than 1990.

　　From the table it can be seen that Shanghai experienced a declining trend in population whereas Jakarta and San Paulo shared a climbing one in spite of a general prediction of increase for all these three metropolises.