雅思写作的十大失分点介绍

　　雅思写作扣分点九、累赘

　　写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。比如：In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.

　　本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句，我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”可以改为：In spite of his laziness, I like him.

　　比如：For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.

　　整个句子可以大大简化为：Diligent people use money only to buy what they need.

　　雅思写作扣分点十、不连贯

　　不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通，这也是考生常犯的毛病。比如：The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.

　　分析：the fresh water与逗号后的it不连贯，it与things在数方面不一致。

　　以上就是小编对雅思写作易失分点有哪些的讲解，希望同学们通过阅读，对雅思成绩提升有一定的帮助。如果同学们在备考中遇到其他问题，小编预祝同学们在雅思考试中取得好的成绩。