雅思图表作文的高分关键分析
但是实际应用时数据并不是一定那么巧正好是这几个百分比,在这些分数上下浮动五个百分点间的数值我们同样可以借助于这5个分数来表达,比如:69%我们可以写成slightly over two thirds, 72%我们可以写成slightly under three quarters等等,通过这样很小的切换,我们既增加了字数,又符合学术化的表达:
23% of the residents in Utah are people of 0-14 age group. 我们便能改为:
Slightly under a quarter of the citizens in Utah are people of 0-14 age group.
除了上述这几个重要分数外,我们有时候还会遇到80%, 90%这两个相对较大的比重,这个时候,我们也可以将其用a majority of或者是a vast majority of来进行学术化的转换:
A majority of courses at college C obtain top rating from inspectors, compared to 60% and 40% of other colleges.
在饼图,柱状图和数据表格中,我们经常会需要表达A占了B的几分之几这样的意思,这个时候,我们可以用以下5个单词或词组来准确表达:
constitute; comprise; take up; account for; make up
I. Asians comprise over one third of the six billion inhabitants.
II. In California, while blacks make up less than 20 percent of the juvenile population, over half of all arrests involve black children.
III. In general, the American general population spent a total of 7 hours 47 minutes on watching TV each week, which account for over half of the total hours.
IV. In 1960, the 15-46 age group constituted over half of the Japanese population.
值得注意的是,occupy这个词也有“占”的意思,但是一般在学术类小作文中我们不用它来表示占据的意思,因为它代表“物理”的占据,而图表中的占据是属于“抽象”的。
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