雅思写作的十种失败开头介绍

　　雅思写作失败开头三：观点模糊态度暧昧 (喷血指数：☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　雅思写作失败开头四：偏离主题无轨电车(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

　　I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

　　雅思写作失败开头五：语法错误惨不忍睹 (喷血指数：☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)

　　About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

　　雅思写作失败开头六：过分简单没有重点 (喷血指数：☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

　　This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

　　雅思写作失败开头七：用词不当 表达不准 (喷血指数：☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

　　雅思写作失败开头八：意思重复原地踏步(喷血指数：☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

　　My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.