雅思写作典型病句分析

　　正：The university also promotes its athletic fame by enrolling and training the students who have special athletic talents. For example, Oxford and Cambridge are very famous in the world. One of reasons probably is the annual boat race on river Thames.

　　误：Universities should give equal opportunities to students who study very well as well as those who can contribute to some special areas.

　　作者用 as well as 表达“既 …，也…”。使用此词组时应特别注意，很多人会在这里犯错 误。如果想表示 “既 … ，也 …”，可以用 as well as。如：This game is good for parents as well as for children. 此句中包含了一个逻辑关系，就 是 game 一词与孩子的关系更密切，与家长的关系不那么密切。如果译成汉语，“孩子”应该放在“家长”之前：这个游戏既对孩子好，也对家长好。用英文表达此逻辑关系时，这两个名词的先后与汉语相反。因此，在写作时不宜轻用 as well as，如要用，请斟酌逻辑关系，把握词序的正确。

　　正： Universities should give equal opportunities to those who can contribute in some special areas as well as those who have academic excellence.

　　误：In modern world-level games, we can see that there are many athletes with higher education background. it attribute success to the new education system that the universities have built.

　　higher education background 不好，应改为 good/excellent educational background。

　　attribute 使用错误。见例句：

　　We attribute the success of the party to the excellent organisational ability of the monitor. 我们把晚会的成功举办归功于班长的出色组织能力。(attribute to 的主动用法，主语是人)

　　The success of the party is attributed to the excellent organisational ability of the monitor.

　　此句的意思与上句一样，只是用了被动形式，主语是某个成功的事情。再如：

　　The improvement of people’s life should be attributed to, among other things, the current economic policy adopted by the central government.

　　人民生活的改善有很多原因，其中之一是由于政府所采取的经济政策。

　　正： In many modern world-level games, there are many athletes with good educational backgrounds. This should be attributed to the new educational system that the universities have built.

　　误：Those students who enrol by lowering academic standards always can’t finish their academic courses well.