雅思大作文的十种常见错误提醒

　　七.不间断句子(run-on sentences)

　　什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。

　　例1. there are many ways we get to know the outside world.剖析：这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：“there are many ways.”以及“we get to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。

　　改为：

　　there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.或：there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world

　　八.措词毛病(troubles in diction)

　　diction是指在特定的句子中怎样适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。

　　例1. the increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.

　　(农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。)

　　剖析：显然，考生把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use (不断增加的使用)”应改为“abusive use (滥用)”。

　　改为：

　　the abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.

　　九.累赘(redundancy)

　　言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。如：

　　in spite of the fact that he is lazy, i like him.本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句，我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”可以改为：in spite of his laziness, i like him.例1. for the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.

　　剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。

　　改为：

　　diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.