雅思写作修改：现代技术对人的影响

　　雅思写作修改：现代技术对人的影响

　　Modern technology has had a great influence on people’s entertainmentchoices, making them less creative. Co you agree or disagree with thisopinion?

　　Modern technology has had a great influence on people’s entertainmentchoices, making them less creative. Do you agree or disagree with thisopinion?

　　Bearing in mind the likely effects of the modern technology onentertainments on today’s users are important, because it is an issue that isdiscussed daily nowadays by people in both the private and public sectors.However, does the modern technology benefits all aspects of human society? Somepeople may answer to the contrary. As far as I can see, current technology isundermining modern people’s creative ability by providing individuals sortedways of relaxation.

　　The likely effects of modern technology on entertainment for people todayare important, because it is an issue that is discussed daily in both theprivate and public sectors. However, does modern technology benefit all aspectsof human society? Some people may answer in the negative. As far as I can see,modern technology undermines people’s creative ability by providing individualspre-digested forms of relaxation.

　　To begin with , it has been known from the latest resources that modernpeople prefer to enjoy high-tech ways of recreation. More and more people fromall works feel so pressuarable that they turn to modern technology which issupposed to be there providing convenient, time-saving and fresh entertainmentwhile fewer and fewer individuals choose to play jigsaws or make some exquisitehandicrafts which is the very things expand their imaginary world and make themmore creative in their spare time.

　　To begin with , it has been known from recent sources that modern peopleenjoy high-tech ways of recreation. More and more people from all walks of lifefeel so pressured that they turn to modern technology to provide convenient,time-saving and fresh entertainment; while fewer and fewer individuals choose toplay jigsaws or make some exquisite handicrafts, the kinds of things that expandtheir imaginations and make them more creative in their spare time.