雅思写作范例：你心目中的好老师

　　Admittedly, a teacher can relatively be more sure about the academicprogress of the students, but not that sure about their moral development forthe simple reason that the society is a big dyeing pool in which one’s beingdyed into a certain color is the result of many factors of which family and manyother things also have a role to play. Therefore, seen from this perspective,the influence of a teacher is, after all, limited.

　　由此，我们可以得出这样的结论：老师除了教授学生学术知识外，还应该竭力塑造他们的个性与道德形象，同时，全社会应该协力确保学生们的全面发展。

　　From the above discussion, we can come to the conclusion that apart fromteaching students academic subjects, a teacher should also try his best to mouldtheir personality and moral image. Meanwhile, the society as a whole is alsosupposed to work together to ensure the students’ overall development.