9条雅思写作高分技巧

　　一、正确使用指代词

　　使用的指代词包括人称代词，物主代词和一些特定的词语。

　　★ 使用人称代词或物主代词代替文章中重复出现的词

　　剑桥4 test4 task2范文中的句子：

　　But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need tobe more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children. If theycould raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsibleindividuals, the whole community would benefit.

　　★ 使用特定的词语来指代某一类事物

　　这些词包括one, that, those, so, this, not和do的各种形式。同时，被替代的可以是名词、动词，也可以是句子。

　　①替代名词(用one, that, those来替代某个名词)

　　剑桥7 test B task2范文中的句子：

　　I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usuallyover paid. However, it is also true that it is only those who reach the very topof their profession who can get these huge salary.

　　②替代动词(用do的各种形式来代替前面提到的动词)