雅思考试大作文范文之先天和后天

　　Version111 Research indicates that the characteristics we were born withhave much more influence on our personality and development than experiences wehave had in our life. Which do you think is the major influence?

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　　Introduction ( 38words)

　　Human's endeavor in researching on factors affecting one's personality anddevelopment has offered quite a amount of proofs. My position may provide youwith a clear notion that nurture plays a far more important role in one'sdevelopment.

　　Body 1 (95words)

　　Reportedly there was a maid, a countryside girl with only an educationalbackground of primary school, working for an American professor who worked inShanghai Jiaotong University, China. After two years of stay at the learned andexotic surroundings, amazingly this plain girl could speak fluent English andstarted to help the host to receive and send e-mails to his students. When theprofessor left for New York later, soon she sought a post at a multinationalfirm. This example clearly reveals a common truth: appropriate nurture can turnan average person to be competent. (topic sentence)

　　Body 2 (89words)

　　I will then go on to examine my position by offering other facts. It iswell believed that overseas graduates who once furthered their education inforeign universities are taking incredible places in China because these eliteshave a broader way of thinking and their bilingual and creative capabilitieshave proved themselves much better than domestic ones. In contrast, some peopleshow their linguistic talent by precisely speaking a variety of dialects butstill lead a poor life because no foreign language learning process has beenconducted for them.

　　Conclusion ( 42words)

　　To sum up, the competence of a former maid and the qualities of overseasChinese students already illustrate an undeniable fact: a right way of nurturecan mould one to be outstanding whilst extraordinary nature without nurture is awaste of resource.