雅思小作文解析及范文:中国和美国的出生率变化

　　Task：The changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000.

　　思路分析：

　　1. 两条线，建议每条线一段;

　　2. 每条线的描述请参考经典折线写法;

　　3. 关键性数据不可少，如最大值，最小值等;

　　参考范文：

　　The graph demonstrated some striking similarities between the Chinese and the US birth rates from 1920 to 2000.

　　The birth rates in China rose from 10% in 1920 to 15% in 1935. Later, the figure plunged to a low of 5% in the 1940s and was followed by an exponential growth to the peak of 20% in 1950. Next, the fertility rate dropped sharply to 8% in the following five years. Finally, the figure declined gradually to 3% during the latter half of the century.

　　Meanwhile, the US had similar birth rate of 12% to that of China in 1920. The figure fluctuated in between 12% and 14% during 1920s and 1930s until it hit a low of 4% in 1945. Five years later, the birth rate reached a peak at 15% in 1950 but it made a steady fall to the final figure of around 7% in 2000.

　　Overall, both countries experienced considerable fluctuations in the similar period with some lows during the 1940s and some highs during the 1930s.

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