雅思写作高分大作文范文：缩小贫富差距创建和谐社会
Some people believe the best way to produce a better society is to ensure there is only a small difference between the earnings of the richest and the poorest. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
For centuries, human society has been blessed with the exploitation of fossil fuels like oil as it uNPRecedentedly advances industrial production.However, gradually, people become aware that the blessing could turn out to be a "curse" since the consequent pollution has been seriously endangering our existence. Personally, I am convinced that reduction of fossil fuel consumption must be promoted and enforced around the world.
几个世纪以来，人类社会一直受到石油等化石燃料的剥削，因为它前所未有地推动了工业生产。然而，逐渐地，人们逐渐意识到，这种祝福可能是一种“诅咒”，因为随之而来的污染严重危害了我们的生存。就我个人而言，我相信减少化石燃料的消耗必须在世界范围内推广和实施。
The sophisticated technology like oil drilling and the oil or coal economy in many parts of the world seem to be so alluring that some people can hardly give up fossil fuels. They harbor the view that fossil fuels are still in abundance, and the related facilities and techniques for obtaining and processing the raw materials like crude oil are so developed that the cost of producing energy is at a historically low level. For these reasons, countries relying heavily on oil economy and well-known energy companies tend to be particularly resistant towards the idea of giving up the fuels. However, for me, these views could hardly be justified.
在世界许多地区，石油钻探、石油或煤炭等复杂的技术似乎是如此诱人，以至于有些人几乎无法放弃化石燃料。他们认为，化石燃料仍然丰富，而获取和加工原油等原材料的相关设施和技术是如此发达，以至于生产能源的成本处于历史最低水平。出于这些原因，依赖石油经济和知名能源公司的国家往往对放弃燃料的想法尤其抵触。然而，对我来说，这些观点是不合理的。
Firstly, the economic benefits are quite likely to be offset by the huge cost of improving the polluted environment. Burning coal, for instance, may be relatively economical compared with using alternative energy like solar power. Nevertheless, the governments’ efforts on reducing pollutants like PM 2. 5 could entail more spending.
首先，经济效益很可能被污染环境的巨大成本所抵消。例如，与使用太阳能等替代能源相比，燃烧煤炭可能相对经济。尽管如此，政府还是努力减少像PM 2这样的污染物。5可能需要更多的支出。
Furthermore, some countries may financially benefit from production of the oil or other fossil fuels, and many developing countries might argue that fossil-fuel-based industrialization weigh more than protection of the environment. However, the air pollution and the consequent climate change are the threats to be confronted by all human beings. In other words, in the face of deteriorating environment, the enormous wealth some countries accumulate and the economic progress others achieve may lose their charm. After all, to survive and flourish on a clean planet is our ultimate goal.
此外，一些国家可能从石油或其他化石燃料的生产中获益，许多发展中国家可能会认为，化石燃料的工业化比保护环境更重要。然而，空气污染和随之而来的气候变化是所有人类面临的威胁。换句话说，面对不断恶化的环境，一些国家积累的巨额财富和其他国家取得的经济进步可能会失去其魅力。毕竟，在一个干净的星球上生存和繁衍是我们的终极目标。
Finally, as long as all the countries enforce the reduction of fossil fuel consumption, the technology for better utilizing the fuels and exploration of renewable, alternative resources could be advanced, finally proving us a "clean new world".
最后，只要所有国家都在强制减少化石燃料的消耗，我们就可以提高利用燃料和探索可再生能源的技术，最终证明我们是一个“清洁的新世界”。
In conclusion, despite obstacles, for the benefits of the whole world and to bring forth improved technology and cleaner energy sources, countries around must collaborate to reduce fossil fuel consumption.
总之，尽管存在种种障碍，为了造福于全世界，并带来改进的技术和更清洁的能源，各国必须合作减少化石燃料的消耗。
雅思写作题目讲解
首先，看清题目的类型，辩论形问题，针对一个话题，写是同意agree，还是不同意disagree。看到best, always, all这样的绝对词，这可能是个故意留给同学们的陷阱，(或看作是个提示)，一般写反对方，不同意会更符合外国人的思维习惯。
解题：thinking，and then writing
Step 1：先认真审题，找出题目的关键词happier society, the ‘best’ way to，small differences between the richest and the poorest members。然后用它们想观点，可以通过回答以下3个问题回答：
1. 首先，什么是happier society?(当然这里不要思考得过多，小心偏题。)
可能是更公平，平等，安全的社会。
2. 是不是只有一种方法to make happier society?如果不是，还有其他什么重要因素?
3. 但是，缩小贫富差距的确是一个可能比较好的方法，可能在某些问题方面。
Step 2:结构一般推荐大家5段：
第一段: Introduction (先直接给出倾向，写不同意，to some extent I disagree this opinion.)
第二段: the 1streason why I disagree
第三段: the 2ndreason why I disagree
第四段: the reason why I agree (-must have a balanced idea)
第五段: conclusion (总结一下，然后再次给出不同意的倾向。)
Step 3：Writing:
Paragraph 1: Introduction
先交代一下背景：‘社会顺速发展，人们开始关心要怎么创造一个更好的社会。一些人提出，最好的方法是缩小贫富差距。’with the development of economy in most countries, people start considering how to create the society they are living happier. Some indicate，to narrow the gap between the richest and the poorest. 然后直接给出不同意的倾向。Although it can be a good way to solve some social problems, I disagree with this view to some extent. I will present my reasons to support my argument.
Paragraph 2: the 1streason why I disagree
可能会有更好的方法 to make a happier society, 确保公民们都有人权，有平等的接受教育的机会，就业的机会，或者看病的等等. Preserve human rights, equality of chance, fair chance of education, employment and health services. 如果政府能确保这些人们的权利，人们会感到满足，从而变得更加开心。Government should raise the infrastructure of health system, make the education compulsory as well as feasible to access, more job opportunities.
Paragraph 3: the 2ndreason why I disagree
另外的方法，应注重对我们的下一代在道德方面的培养。让他们学会互相尊重，爱戴老人，为人正直等。build up a generation，be fortified by moral values like, loving, helping, respecting, avoid cheating, lying among community。
Paragraph 4: the reason why I agree (-must have a balanced idea)
但是，缩小贫富差距的确是一个解决问题的方法。创造美好社会的一个方式可以是减少犯罪率，而很多研究表明，很多犯罪问题可能是因为没有工作机会或者没有接受过良好教育造成的。在这种情况下，缩小贫富差距，的确是一个好方法。crime rates have rocketed, caused by the wealth gap，undermines equality of opportunity of education and employment, lack of job opportunities in their areas, turn to crime，reduce wealthy gap，to control crime and start building a perfect society.
Paragraph 5: conclusion
总结一下，不是只有缩小贫富差距可以创造一个美好的社会，除此之外，让人们享有公平的权力更加重要，然后再次给出不同意的倾向
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