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雅思写作高分大作文范文：成年人学习应该自学还是上课?

2020-09-24来源:互联网

　　Some people think adults should learn practical skills by themselves, while others believe that learning from a teacher in a classroom is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　雅思大作文参考范文

　　A life’s study is considered to be much more important than ever before. For most of us, we only learn and study in schools, but the everlasting changing world requires us to keep a habit of learning all the time, such as different kinds of practical skills, to confront the life challenge. Here comes a heated debate whether adult should learn by themselves or choose turning to a teacher in classroom. As for me, self-learning and teaching both cannot be ignored.

　　生命的研究被认为比以往任何时候都更加重要。对我们大多数人来说，我们只在学校学习和学习，但不断变化的世界要求我们保持学习的习惯，例如不同的实践技能，来面对生活的挑战。这里有一场激烈的辩论：成人应该自己学习，还是选择在教室里找老师。就我而言，自学和教学都是不可忽视的。

　　On one hand, self-learning is much more available for most adults for the simple reason that it demands less time from those who are always under the great pressure of work and family. People can squeeze any time he/she can in daily life for a short learning. Reading a chapter of the textbook during the break will make it easier to finish heavy one within a week. By contrast, going to courses, night courses for example, usually occupies a lot of time after work, which are supposed to be used for relaxing or family time. Moreover, it is the affluent resources online that enable self-learning for adults more possible and practical. There are massive number of courses on some better known video websites, cooking, gardening, language smoothing......to name a few which can drag users into any online classroom for something new.

　　一方面，对于大多数成年人来说，自我学习更容易获得，原因很简单，因为他们需要的时间更少，因为他们总是处于工作和家庭的巨大压力之下。人们可以在日常生活中挤出任何时间来做短暂的学习。在课间休息时阅读教科书的一章会让你更容易在一周内完成繁重的工作。相比之下，参加课程，比如夜间课程，通常在下班后会占用大量的时间，而这些都是用来放松或家庭时间的。此外，网络上丰富的资源使成年人的自学更加可行和实用。在一些更知名的视频网站，烹饪，园艺，语言平滑等方面，有大量的课程。列举一些可以把用户拖到任何在线课堂上的新东西。

　　On the other hand, self-learning online may arouse some questions, such as it cannot help people solve professional problems unless turning to the real teacher. Besides, it also takes courage, persistence as well as self-controlling for people to learn by themselves online, because there are a great number of temptations through hyperlink all around and it is easy for us to digress from what we are intended to do.

　　另一方面，网上自学可能会引发一些问题，例如，除非求助于真正的老师，否则无法帮助人们解决专业问题。此外，它还需要勇气、坚持和自我控制，让人们在网上自学，因为通过超链接，我们有很多的诱惑，我们很容易偏离我们想要做的事情。

　　All in all. Teacher can help us to solve professional problems and a class will create a sound learning atmosphere, but the lifestyle of most adults makes it impossible to attending a long term and time class. The best method is to balance the two ways.

　　总而言之。老师可以帮助我们解决专业问题，一个班级将创造一个良好的学习氛围，但是大多数成年人的生活方式使他们不可能参加长期和时间的课程。最好的方法是平衡这两种方法。

　　审题要点：

　　关键词一方面 practical skills 而不是其他比如历史，语文等等。因为需要围绕什么是practical skills写，除了computer skills, language skills, driving skills, cooking skills等也应该可以算在内。在行文的时候，有了这样的拓展，内容才会更加丰富。另一方面，从teacher/class 给成人带来的好处展开即可。结论可以是中立的，也可以倾向一边。

　　思路分析：

　　建议写法：两种学习方法结合，大部分时间可以自学和生活中实践，而在开始的时候，可以老师引入，学习技巧。

　　开头：简单引入话题

　　第二段:成人自学的背景和优势

　　WHY：

　　1.生活繁忙，压力大，很少有时间和余力去上课和学习

　　2.网上资源丰富，可以在零碎时间及时学习和积累

　　WHAT：

　　1.节省大量的精力和时间

　　2.自学的过程可以给小孩做榜样，开放双方的潜力

　　第三段：HOWEVER

　　1.自学很容易造成误区和不解，在网上无法找到专业的回答