英语专业四级写作综合辅导 英语专业四级写作怎样使句子多样化

在上述12个句子中，(a)-(g)是简单句；(h)是并列句；(i)-(l)是复杂句。简单句除(b)和(g)之外，其他五样，用的人并不多。人们最喜欢采用复杂句，尤其是(j)和(k)这两款；接着便是并列句(h)。如果 大多数人的句子只限于(b),(g), (h), (j)和(k)这五种，而其他的则弃如敝屣，不是很可惜吗？
 增强英语语句表现力的有效方法

 一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。

 1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：
 Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
 Revision: The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
 Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

 2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：
 1) Weak: The team members are good players.
 Revision: The team members play well.

 2) Weak: One worker’s plan is the elimination of tardiness.
 Revision: One worker’s plan eliminates tardiness.

 3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例 如：
 1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.
 Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.

 2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.
 Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.

 二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如：
 1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.
 Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

 2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.
 Better: She compares prices and quality.

 三、尽量运用主动语态。例如：
 1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.
 Better: Charity has supported the organization.

 2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
 Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

 四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。例如：
 1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
 Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

 2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
 Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

 3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
 Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

 4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
 Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

 五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。例如：
 1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
 Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.

 2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
 Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.