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实例讲解如何挑选托福写作中的词汇

2014-10-14来源:互联网

  5.Original: Ireally believe that smoking is harmful to people’s health.

  Revised: Ihave a profound conviction that smoking is harmful to people’shealth.

  亮点评析

  conviction的意思是“坚定的看法或信仰”,have aprofoundconclusion表示对某种看法深信不疑,作文中提出观点的句子用have a profoundconclusion会比用believe态度更坚决,立场更鲜明,而且believe这个词非常简单,是英语初学者就应掌握的词汇,换成have a profoundconclusion立即增加了句子的复杂程度,体现了较强的语言运用能力。类似的提出观点的表达还有:

  I hold apoint of view that…

  I hold theopinion that…

  6.Original:We know that sometimes success is measured by how much money youearn.

  Revised: Itdoes not surprise us to discover that sometimes success ismeasured in terms ofthe money you earn.

  亮点评析

  如上句的believe一样,know也是非常初级的词汇作文中出现I believe that…,I knowthat…这样的表达只能体现考生写作技巧的稚嫩,用It does not surprise us to discover that…替换We knowthat…并没有改变原句的含义,却使全句顿时增添了亮点。

  7.Original:We all know that most factories would be of no use if there werenot cleanwater supply.

  Revised: Itgoes without saying that most factories would be of no use ifthere were notclean water supply.

  亮点评析

  同上例一样,know这样的初级词汇应避免在作文中使用,It goes without sayingthat…是一个固定结构,意思是“……是不言而喻的”,常在作文中用来引经据典或表明一个尽人皆知的道理,类似的表达还有:

  An old sayinggoes that…

  Proverb goesthat…

  It isuniversally acknowledged that…

  It isgenerally accepted that…

  8.Original:Some other people think that people should read extensively.

  Revised:Another position says that people should read extensively.

  亮点评析

  同know,believe一样,think也应该尽量避免使用,修改后的句子中是用Another position saysthat…代替think提出另一种观点,也可以用hold a point of view,hold the opinion这样的短语替换。

  9.Original:The unexpected win of the match give us confidence.

  Revised: Theunexpected win of the match boost our confidence.

  亮点评析

  give也属于英语中最初级、最基本的词汇,只表示“给,给予”这个动作,不涉及动作的性质和状态,若表示增添信心,增强士气,比较地道的说法是用boostconfidence/morale,如:The change of management has boosted moralethroughout thecompany. 管理模式的改变使整个公司上下士气倍受鼓舞。

  10.Original:The use of drugs has increased greatly in the last tenyears.

  Revised: Theuse of drugs has increased significantly in the last tenyears.

  亮点评析

  greatly是一般用语,表示程度高,“很,非常”,使用相当普遍而没有新意,在写作中应尽量避免使用这些通俗而又陈旧的词汇,应换用一些更加正式,更有说服力的词语,例如significantly表示达到了非常重要的或可观的程度,“重大的,可观的”,能够具体说明药品使用方面,增长幅度巨大。significantly还可以替换成considerably,tremendously等,同样具有不错的表达效果。

  以上就是托福写作中挑选词汇的解析,希望对大家有帮助。而且,要想最终想以高分托福结尾,单词的多样性也是必不可少的,所以日常的积累必不可少。