名师点评：11月3日和5日新托福网考（二）
2008-09-24来源:
WRITING：
The Integrated Writing Task
． 考生需要在3分钟之内读完一篇学术性文章，接着听一段与之话题相关的讲座录音，随后就讲座的要点写一篇概述。
． You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response。 Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage。 Typically， an effective response will be 150 to 225 words。
Third， influential people might emerge， and lead the group towards glory or failure。 If the influent people are going in the right direction there would be no problem。 But in the cases where they go in the wrong direction， there is nobody that has enough influence to counter the decision made。 In other words， the group might turn out into a dictatorship， with the influential part as the leader， and might be less flexible in thinking。 They might become one-sided， and thus fail to succeed。
大家可以看到，满分的作文仍然是可以有不影响理解的拼写错误的。
Independent Writing Task
独立部分请大家关注我在28&29日评论中关于如何构思以及如何写主题句的那篇文章。
按结构分类：
A or B: State a preference: Some people believe A…Others prefer B
Agree or Disagree: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Compare(similarity) and contrast(difference)
Persuasive Essay: Choose/Why/How/What:最好事先想好答案
Topic Type Percentage of Topics
Agreeing or disagreeing 70/185 38%
Stating a preference 68/185 37%
Persuasive essay: explanation or argument 47/185 25%
可以参考下列分类模板
如果时间比较紧张的同学，可以参考下列分类模板：
Classified Templates:
A or B
1．The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________。就理由进行解释_____________________。For instance，____________________
Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________。就理由进行解释___________________For example，____________________
The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________
Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B， I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious。 Such as________________。
In a word， ________________________________________________。So， it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A。
2．将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B， quite a few would deem that______________________， but others， in contrast， believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point。 Among countless factors which influence -A/-B， there are three conspicuous aspects as follows。
The main reason for my propensity for _________is that___________________
The second reason can be seen by every person that________。
In addition， these reasons are also usable when we consider that_________。
There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________。
In a word， _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________。Taking into account of all these factors， we may reach the conclusion that___________。
3．Some people prefer to A。 others believe B。 When faced with the decision of A or B， quite a few would claim that______________， but others， in contrast， deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point。 There are numerous reasons why___________， and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here。
The main reason why I agree with the above statement， however， is that_____________________。 Take___________as an example， ______________。
There is another factor that deserves some words here。 Such as ________________________。
Similarly， these reasons are also usable when we consider that______________。(examples:___________)。
From the above you might got idea that I agree______________。(repeat the above three reason____________)。So， it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________。
4。In my point of view， A is as important as， if not more important than B。 So it is sagacious to choose A。 Among count less factors which influence A。 there are three conspicuous aspects as follows。
The above point is certainly true if A is considered。 For example，___________________
Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B。 For instance，_______________
It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important 。 B________也好_________。
In a word， to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B， and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A。 For the reasons presented above， I strongly commit to the notion that A， but not B。
5。 When faced with the decision of A or B， quite a few would claim that A， but others， in contrast， deems B as the premier choice and that is also my point。 This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points。
We may look into every possible reason; however， fore most reason for B is ____________________。 For example， ______________。
Also， ________________________。
This is arbitrary to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph。
Similarly， these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________。
The Integrated Writing Task
． 考生需要在3分钟之内读完一篇学术性文章，接着听一段与之话题相关的讲座录音，随后就讲座的要点写一篇概述。
． You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response。 Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage。 Typically， an effective response will be 150 to 225 words。
Third， influential people might emerge， and lead the group towards glory or failure。 If the influent people are going in the right direction there would be no problem。 But in the cases where they go in the wrong direction， there is nobody that has enough influence to counter the decision made。 In other words， the group might turn out into a dictatorship， with the influential part as the leader， and might be less flexible in thinking。 They might become one-sided， and thus fail to succeed。
大家可以看到，满分的作文仍然是可以有不影响理解的拼写错误的。
Independent Writing Task
独立部分请大家关注我在28&29日评论中关于如何构思以及如何写主题句的那篇文章。
按结构分类：
A or B: State a preference: Some people believe A…Others prefer B
Agree or Disagree: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Compare(similarity) and contrast(difference)
Persuasive Essay: Choose/Why/How/What:最好事先想好答案
Topic Type Percentage of Topics
Agreeing or disagreeing 70/185 38%
Stating a preference 68/185 37%
Persuasive essay: explanation or argument 47/185 25%
可以参考下列分类模板
如果时间比较紧张的同学，可以参考下列分类模板：
Classified Templates:
A or B
1．The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________。就理由进行解释_____________________。For instance，____________________
Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________。就理由进行解释___________________For example，____________________
The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________
Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B， I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious。 Such as________________。
In a word， ________________________________________________。So， it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A。
2．将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B， quite a few would deem that______________________， but others， in contrast， believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point。 Among countless factors which influence -A/-B， there are three conspicuous aspects as follows。
The main reason for my propensity for _________is that___________________
The second reason can be seen by every person that________。
In addition， these reasons are also usable when we consider that_________。
There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________。
In a word， _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________。Taking into account of all these factors， we may reach the conclusion that___________。
3．Some people prefer to A。 others believe B。 When faced with the decision of A or B， quite a few would claim that______________， but others， in contrast， deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point。 There are numerous reasons why___________， and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here。
The main reason why I agree with the above statement， however， is that_____________________。 Take___________as an example， ______________。
There is another factor that deserves some words here。 Such as ________________________。
Similarly， these reasons are also usable when we consider that______________。(examples:___________)。
From the above you might got idea that I agree______________。(repeat the above three reason____________)。So， it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________。
4。In my point of view， A is as important as， if not more important than B。 So it is sagacious to choose A。 Among count less factors which influence A。 there are three conspicuous aspects as follows。
The above point is certainly true if A is considered。 For example，___________________
Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B。 For instance，_______________
It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important 。 B________也好_________。
In a word， to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B， and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A。 For the reasons presented above， I strongly commit to the notion that A， but not B。
5。 When faced with the decision of A or B， quite a few would claim that A， but others， in contrast， deems B as the premier choice and that is also my point。 This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points。
We may look into every possible reason; however， fore most reason for B is ____________________。 For example， ______________。
Also， ________________________。
This is arbitrary to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph。
Similarly， these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________。
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