托福IBT口语Task1,Task2,Task3实例赏析

　　复习计划-----具体情况具体分析
　　我所负责的客户的复习规划时间长短不一，大多数是在2-3月之间，当然凡事都有例外，也有极个别的客户复习跨度为5-6个月，或者是另外一个极端20天，针对这两种情况，前者我建议不要过早地投入高密度的复习中，那样会使自己过早产生厌倦感，到真正考试前一个月了反而提不起精神来，适得其反！而针对后者，我们则要快刀斩乱麻，不要在做什么专项训练，投入100%的精神好好地做5-8套Delta/Klaplan/OG模拟试题才为上上之策，然后更重要的是做完后认真分析模拟题，把它吃透喽！
　　今天我所列举的这几道实例的托友就属于上面的第二种情况，看过他的初步测试题后，我惊奇地发现这位仁兄的口语部分Task4- Task6都掌握得不错，反而是属于personal reference的Task1- Task3中的错误相对较多！而且在语音、语调、流利程度方面也存在些问题，我在想这难道就是所谓的“遇强则强遇弱则弱”，哈哈，再次感慨世界真奇妙！那么大家就一起来分析借鉴一下吧！
　　实例1
　　Choose a place you go to often that is important to you and explain why it is important. Please include specific details in your explanation.
　　Sample answer
　　The place I often go to that is important to me is school. I spend most of my time in school. I study in school and I love with other classmates. This is most favorite important that school brings to me. I not only study knowledge at school, but also learn how to be a good person. I live with other friends, live in group and how to treat others. This is useful in my lifetime.
　　解析
　　1、W: I love with other classmates.
　　R: I love to be with other classmates.
　　2、W: This is most favorite important that school brings to me.
　　R: That is the joy of living which school brings to me.
　　说明：这位托友要表达的是这是学校所带给我的生活乐趣，他通过把一系列的形容词堆砌在一块来表达，这种方法是错误的！
　　3、W: I live with other friends, live in group and how to treat others.
　　R: I can develop/ cultivate the team spirit and improve the capacity of interpersonal communication through communicating with my classmates.
　　说明：这位托友要表达的是通过与同学、朋友相处让其学会了怎么和别人相处而且培养了自己的团队精神，但是他的表述还是显得词不达意！
　　实例2
Some college students choose to take courses in a variety of subject areas in order to get a broad education. Others choose to focus on a single subject area in order to have a deeper understanding of that area. Which approach to course selection do you think is better for students and why? 　　Sample answer
　　A varies of subject courses is better for college students. Because it may make the college students to be an independent and complete person, but not a professor in one subject. Those knowledge might be for useful use in lifetime.
　　解析
　　（1）W: A varies of subject courses is better for college students.
　　R: To study a variety of subject courses is better for college students.
　　说明：托友要表达的意思是掌握多学科的知识对大学生有益！故第一句的表达是错误的，这种初级的语法错误是极其不可取得！
　　(2) W: Because it may make the college students to be independent complete person, but not a professor in one subject.
　　R: It makes students to acquire/ grasp a great deal of knowledge on different subjects, not just well informed about one subject.
　　(3)W: Those knowledge might be for useful use in lifetime.
　　R: Extensive knowledge does good to them throughout their lives.
　　说明：如上面2和3解析，这位托友完全是采用中国式英语的表达，或者是把自己所想的对应翻译成英文，并不是用英文思维来构思表达。