托福IBT口语Task6实例赏析
2010-06-21来源:和谐英语
实例2
Using points and details from the talk, describe the physical differences that animals had to adapt to when they moved from water to land.
Sample answer
There are three main different between landing environment and water environment. The first one is oxygen content. There are more oxygen on land so land animal evoke lung to help them to breathe air. The second different is air destiny. Animals must evolve stronger body to support themselves. The third different is temperature. Temperature changes easily on land than in water. So land animals must maintain their body temperature.
解析
1、陈述中凡是使用different的地方都应该改为difference，因为这个topic主要是围绕陆地生存环境和海洋生存环境的区别而展开的，它需要的是n形式的difference而非adj形式的different。
2、W: There are more oxygen on land so land animal evoke lung to help them to breathe air.
R: There is more oxygen on land .Land animals can get oxygen much more easily that water animals can. Once land animals evolved the appropriate organs, such as lung.
说明：两组形近词的比较：evoke, evolve; oxygen, organ
Evoke表示引起、引发。Evoke/ stir/ awake sympathy引发同情心。
Evolve means develop from a simple form to a more complex one gradually (of animals or plants),即表示进化。
Oxygen n 氧气，organ n器官,这两个词的发音也很相近，所以大家在做笔记时或者陈述时都要小心了，因为它们的含义真的是大相径庭！
3、W: The second different is air destiny. Animals must evolve stronger body to support themselves.
R: The second difference is the destiny of water and air. Animals must develop stronger body to support themselves.
说明：我们可以看得出这位托友遗漏了第二种区别的主旨句的信息分支，这样就会被适当扣分，此外，其使用了develop避免了上面的evolve的重复，丰富了语言表达。
总体评析：这位托友对这套题的把握不错！因为排除了上述习题和他所学专业相去甚远的因素不说，他还是很好地掌握了lecture所给出的关键信息，当然和上一道题一样，本题的表述还是存在着一定的信息遗漏问题。这就要求托友在练习中做笔记方面要继续努力喽！
实例3
Explain how the emotional intelligence affects people’s behaviors
Sample answer
Emotional intelligence consists of self-control, self-decision and social ability. People with emotional intelligence understand their feelings. The young people with emotional intelligence are generally sensitive. Emotional intelligence causes young people to experience emotional highs and lows and feel everything strongly.
解析
(1) W: The young people with emotional intelligence are generally sensitive. Emotional intelligence causes young people to experience emotional highs and lows and feel everything strongly.
R: The young people with emotional intelligence are generally sensitive and moody/ temperamental and feel everything strongly.
(2)对lecture材料的分析
从上面的表述中我们不难看出这位托友在做笔记方面还有待提高，而且很明显地缺乏针对性练习，致使其在表述中断断续续，出现较多的提顿，使表达听起来不太流畅！但是我们今天主要分析一下lecture材料，我认为这个材料通常分为三段式：结合本题来说，首先它大体介绍一下实验----对12-17 years old的young people with high intelligence and social ability 进行调查，问了两个问题：Do you ever think about your own thinking? Who am I? What is the answer? 然后，材料中会给出一个具体的事例------16岁女孩的回答：Other people all think that her life is easy because she is intelligent. But in her opinion, she is very understood, sensitive and emotional person. She gets angered easily. She has a lot of problems of her own just because of her intelligence.最后，就会针对这个事例进行一些理论方面的分析，大家要提高警觉了，因为你要重点记录这部分内容，它们将会是你的陈述部分的理论依据：What the girl said shows the person with high emotional intelligence understand their feelings. However, when young people think deeply about everything and feel everything strongly, they also experience problems. They feel impressed and guilty for being different for everyone else.
Using points and details from the talk, describe the physical differences that animals had to adapt to when they moved from water to land.
Sample answer
There are three main different between landing environment and water environment. The first one is oxygen content. There are more oxygen on land so land animal evoke lung to help them to breathe air. The second different is air destiny. Animals must evolve stronger body to support themselves. The third different is temperature. Temperature changes easily on land than in water. So land animals must maintain their body temperature.
解析
1、陈述中凡是使用different的地方都应该改为difference，因为这个topic主要是围绕陆地生存环境和海洋生存环境的区别而展开的，它需要的是n形式的difference而非adj形式的different。
2、W: There are more oxygen on land so land animal evoke lung to help them to breathe air.
R: There is more oxygen on land .Land animals can get oxygen much more easily that water animals can. Once land animals evolved the appropriate organs, such as lung.
说明：两组形近词的比较：evoke, evolve; oxygen, organ
Evoke表示引起、引发。Evoke/ stir/ awake sympathy引发同情心。
Evolve means develop from a simple form to a more complex one gradually (of animals or plants),即表示进化。
Oxygen n 氧气，organ n器官,这两个词的发音也很相近，所以大家在做笔记时或者陈述时都要小心了，因为它们的含义真的是大相径庭！
3、W: The second different is air destiny. Animals must evolve stronger body to support themselves.
R: The second difference is the destiny of water and air. Animals must develop stronger body to support themselves.
说明：我们可以看得出这位托友遗漏了第二种区别的主旨句的信息分支，这样就会被适当扣分，此外，其使用了develop避免了上面的evolve的重复，丰富了语言表达。
总体评析：这位托友对这套题的把握不错！因为排除了上述习题和他所学专业相去甚远的因素不说，他还是很好地掌握了lecture所给出的关键信息，当然和上一道题一样，本题的表述还是存在着一定的信息遗漏问题。这就要求托友在练习中做笔记方面要继续努力喽！
实例3
Explain how the emotional intelligence affects people’s behaviors
Sample answer
Emotional intelligence consists of self-control, self-decision and social ability. People with emotional intelligence understand their feelings. The young people with emotional intelligence are generally sensitive. Emotional intelligence causes young people to experience emotional highs and lows and feel everything strongly.
解析
(1) W: The young people with emotional intelligence are generally sensitive. Emotional intelligence causes young people to experience emotional highs and lows and feel everything strongly.
R: The young people with emotional intelligence are generally sensitive and moody/ temperamental and feel everything strongly.
(2)对lecture材料的分析
从上面的表述中我们不难看出这位托友在做笔记方面还有待提高，而且很明显地缺乏针对性练习，致使其在表述中断断续续，出现较多的提顿，使表达听起来不太流畅！但是我们今天主要分析一下lecture材料，我认为这个材料通常分为三段式：结合本题来说，首先它大体介绍一下实验----对12-17 years old的young people with high intelligence and social ability 进行调查，问了两个问题：Do you ever think about your own thinking? Who am I? What is the answer? 然后，材料中会给出一个具体的事例------16岁女孩的回答：Other people all think that her life is easy because she is intelligent. But in her opinion, she is very understood, sensitive and emotional person. She gets angered easily. She has a lot of problems of her own just because of her intelligence.最后，就会针对这个事例进行一些理论方面的分析，大家要提高警觉了，因为你要重点记录这部分内容，它们将会是你的陈述部分的理论依据：What the girl said shows the person with high emotional intelligence understand their feelings. However, when young people think deeply about everything and feel everything strongly, they also experience problems. They feel impressed and guilty for being different for everyone else.
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