托福口语实例赏析

　　实例3
　　Social Interaction
People deal with each other every day. This interaction is at the heart of social life. The study of social interaction is concerned with the influence people have over one another's behavior. People take each other into account in their daily behavior. and in fact, the very presence of others can affect behavior. For example, one principle of social interaction, audience effects, suggests that individuals' work is affected by their knowledge that they are visible to others, that the presence of others tends to alter the way people behave or perform. an activity.
　　Explain how the examples of tying shoes and learning to type demonstrate the principle of audience effects.
　　Sample answer 3
　　The example shows us that people who are aware of being observed will type shoes faster and make more mistakes in the learning process. It just like people deal with others. So you know people are the members of society. The interaction is necessary and can not been avoided, when people know they are in public and they are not only being watched by one person. It will make them nervous or even confused, so this causes them increase the speed of behavior. This is just proved the audience effect.
　　解析
　　这篇陈述存在的问题还是没有很好地把握题目要求，我们看到题干中很明确地要求大家结合听力部分的the examples of tying shoes and learning to type来阐释the principle of audience effects.而这位托友则仅用一个句话来高度概括听力材料中的信息，显然这是不够的！应该适当加些关于Listening Materials中的细节：According to the professor, the people are divided into two groups. One group is told they have been observed, however, the other group doesn’t know they are being watched…….建议结尾处点题：The principle of audience effect happens.这样就Perfect了！