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托福口语:如何将句子形象化、可视化

2014-11-20来源:互联网

  和谐英语托福频道为大家讲解如何将托福口语优秀的句子形象化、可视化。

  例题:

  Choose a place you go to often that is important to you and explain why itis important. Please include specific details in your explanation.

  Answer:

  The most important place to me is library. I like reading very much. Inlibrary I can read books I want, novels, science books, even history books. Theknowledge I want is prepared to me.

  解析:

  (1) Original: In library I can read books I want, novels, science books,even history books.

  Revised:In library I can read books I want, such as, novels, sciencebooks,even history books.

  这样会使句子过渡衔接地更加自然,此外,such as它非常口语化,在口语中使用正合适,但是在写作中则不要使用为妙。

  (2)深层次陈述问题方面的欠缺。

  从上面的scripts中可以看得出他在全方位地支撑论点方面还有提升的空间。

  其实他还可以从study, rest, date这几个分支来阐述。具体可以这样表述:Sometimes I can study there.Because it is a very quiet place; it is also a good place for me to take a rest.I can relax in the library. As nobody bothers me there; moreover, the libraryprovides a wonderful environment for lovers to have adate.很明显添加这些内容之后,整个陈述就显得很完整了!