托福口语评分标准解析|实例详解
hi guys, this is Jiarui, today we’re gonna continue to talk about scoring rubrics of toefl speaking section. 今天依旧是由我来给大家讲解托福口语评分标准,之前的内容中我们主要讲解了托福口语评分三大维度以及四分评分标准的具体内容【参考阅读:托福口语评分标准解析|从零开始】,不知道大家还记不记得老师上节课给大家留了一个小小的任务,判断一下以下这两个sample responses哪一个是满分回答?
题目:
Some universities require first year students to live in dormitories on campus. Others allow students to live off campus. Which policy do you think is better and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.
sample 1
I think the better policy is to make student live in the dorm, because the first year student live in the dorm, because I think they can be safer first, because they are from most of them are come from other town, so they don’t really know the environment. so I think it safer. huh, moreover I think they can make friends in the dorm so they can have a good relationship to know on the, on the university’s is, the goal I mean, they know better the environment. Especially they don’t have cars.
sample 2
I think it’s better for the first year students to live on campus rather than off campus. Main reason because they are new to the city and it safer for them to live on campus where there’s more security. Because they don’t know much about the city in the first place. Second of all, it helps them to become more familiar with the surroundings where they have to study. It also helps them to meet new people. Living in the dorm encourages friendships with people who you might not seem very comfortable with first time. And it helps to meet new people, it helps to interact with the seniors if any live in your dorm.
现在来公布正确答案,sample 2是满分回答,不知道大家有没有回答正确呢?