托福写作常见50个病句分析篇

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What’s about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.