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托福作文范例Topic 2:Parents are the best teachers?

2012-06-14来源:和谐英语

  Who teaches you to walk? Who teaches you to speak? It is your parents who teach you to do these basic things in your life. So don't you think that parents are the best teachers?

参考分析

1、因观点绝对而不能同意。

  • 不是所有的父母都是好老师
  • 最好的老师不仅仅是父母
  • 有些父母尽管善良,但对教育孩子一无所知
  • 有些父母不配做孩子的老师,对孩子有不良影响

2、同意父母是最好的老师
(1)父母从小就和我们在一起,给我们很多的知识
(2)父母和我们最为亲密,在任何时候,都会毫无保留地给我们知识
(3)父母最了解我们,所以他们给我们的建议和意见都是最有针对性的

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  Firstly, parents know us very much. Parents give us life, and I think that we will spend large amount of time with them. So they know our merit and demerit in details. Meanwhile, they will help us to get rid of our demerit.
  Furthermore, parents possessed many experiences. Since they are older than us, they have experienced many things. Sometimes, they are just like our models. And as the saying goes: "Example is better than precept." So we will unconsciously copy some of our parents' habits and styles of behavior, i.e. we can learn many things from them.
  Finally, parents will teach us everything. Since school teachers can just teach us knowledge from the books, our parents can teach us everything. For example, I learn knitting, cooking and makeup from my mother, while learn fixing leaky faucet from my father. They are the persons who love me most, so they will teach me everything without reservations.
  Just as the saying goes: "There is no place like home." And I think there is no teacher like our parents. They are the best teachers in our life.